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Array ( [sid] => 167744 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => breaking out of your empty shell [time] => 2011-10-10 01:21:09 [hometext] => I'm ready now to start writing again and hope you like this and the more to follow [bodytext] => I thought my heart
had taken flight
after the torture i
it been put through


An empty shell rooming around
no feeling no happiness
just a empty empty shell

For months and months
I was this empty shell
And I didn't care

just when I accepted this
my empty shell space
you bumped into me

Suddaly I could smell the air
see the colors on the trees
like something released me

This woman this girl had set me free
she busted me out of my shell
I will find her name

Now eyes open
and know what I'm looking for
I know shes there waiting for

Then there at a bar totally unaware
caught each others eyes
I knew and so did she
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 2 [informant] => vampyrekiss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
breaking out of your empty shell

Contributed by vampyrekiss on Monday, 10th October 2011 @ 01:21:09 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I thought my heart
had taken flight
after the torture i
it been put through


An empty shell rooming around
no feeling no happiness
just a empty empty shell

For months and months
I was this empty shell
And I didn't care

just when I accepted this
my empty shell space
you bumped into me

Suddaly I could smell the air
see the colors on the trees
like something released me

This woman this girl had set me free
she busted me out of my shell
I will find her name

Now eyes open
and know what I'm looking for
I know shes there waiting for

Then there at a bar totally unaware
caught each others eyes
I knew and so did she




Copyright © vampyrekiss ... [ 2011-10-10 01:21:09]
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Re: breaking out of your empty shell (User Rating: 1 )
by xanvier on Monday, 10th October 2011 @ 09:52:31 AM AEST
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sometimes you have to look hard deep inside your heart to find an empty shell to put your deepest thoughts that has clouded your mind and you will find a reason to move on. nice and beautiful poetry....


Re: breaking out of your empty shell (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 10th October 2011 @ 11:34:57 PM AEST
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Good to know u r writing once again.
Great write.
Blessings,
emy


Re: breaking out of your empty shell (User Rating: 1 )
by vampyrekiss on Tuesday, 11th October 2011 @ 01:37:44 PM AEST
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thanks emy it feels good to be writing again




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