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Stop trying to bring me back
I’ll fight you the entire way
I don’t cut any slack

Don’t try to drag me into Oz
It will never work
I’ll kill the Munchkins and the witch
I swear I’ll go berserk

Cotton candy fires,
Gumdrops sticky red
Sugarplum grenades
On a gummy bear’s head

I left Pooh to starve,
I killed Bambi’s mother
The villain of all fairytales,
Snow White and every other

I left behind the fiction,
No longer what I need
They’ll say they chased me out
With Bambi in the lead

I wonder if they miss me
In Never Never Land
At least I’ll be remembered,
The croc who stole Hook’s hand [comments] => 5 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 43 [informant] => ravenoktober [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Malice in Wonderland

Contributed by ravenoktober on Friday, 7th October 2011 @ 08:55:38 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I’ve reached the point of no return,
Stop trying to bring me back
I’ll fight you the entire way
I don’t cut any slack

Don’t try to drag me into Oz
It will never work
I’ll kill the Munchkins and the witch
I swear I’ll go berserk

Cotton candy fires,
Gumdrops sticky red
Sugarplum grenades
On a gummy bear’s head

I left Pooh to starve,
I killed Bambi’s mother
The villain of all fairytales,
Snow White and every other

I left behind the fiction,
No longer what I need
They’ll say they chased me out
With Bambi in the lead

I wonder if they miss me
In Never Never Land
At least I’ll be remembered,
The croc who stole Hook’s hand

Copyright Â© ravenoktober ... [ 2011-10-07 08:55:38]
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Re: Malice in Wonderland (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Friday, 7th October 2011 @ 09:28:35 AM AEST
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A bit agresive but nice

Re: Malice in Wonderland (User Rating: 1 )
by thefacade on Saturday, 8th October 2011 @ 04:17:43 AM AEST
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Actually a good poem. After sifting through some of the worst poetry on the internet, I find something interesting, finally.
Keep posting, hey.

Re: Malice in Wonderland (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Saturday, 8th October 2011 @ 01:21:19 PM AEST
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Quirky and unique, with a sinister underbelly.
I liked it, it has an unusual quality about it.

Steve

Re: Malice in Wonderland (User Rating: 1 )
by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on Monday, 10th October 2011 @ 03:14:07 AM AEST
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cool and imaginitive, wasnt too sure when i started reading it, but glad i pushed through to the end.

Re: Malice in Wonderland (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 20th October 2011 @ 01:19:01 AM AEST
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this is really good. i liked it. well written. it's unique.

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