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Array ( [sid] => 167632 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Significant Crimes [time] => 2011-10-04 15:37:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Announcements embellished with your name are constant

As I think of your more significant crimes

Do not confuse yourself for I shall include that I have partaken in your wrong

That is, my fallacies became yours; twas a never ending circle of fault

Why is it now that you are caught by the guards for menial wrongdoings

 

Everyday is a straight-face contest; better yet a make-no-eye-contact duel

For we have forgotten how to smile or even compassionately greet one another

Has my absence created a void which you must fill with immoral actions

Or is it that your absence has created non-stop concern and hypochondria in my vast mind

If only the answers to these questions were as clear as your recent charges and consequences

 

Today I observed a fraction of your everyday actions and shall do the same tomorrow

The difference in tomorrow is that I will have shared my point with many readers to analyze

And perhaps you will take a glance of my poetic response to our once-love

Then again does not love never end even when the experience is over? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 237 [topic] => 44 [informant] => Deidra_Carmichael [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Nostalgic )
Significant Crimes

Contributed by Deidra_Carmichael on Tuesday, 4th October 2011 @ 03:37:05 PM in AEST
Topic: Nostalgic



Announcements embellished with your name are constant

As I think of your more significant crimes

Do not confuse yourself for I shall include that I have partaken in your wrong

That is, my fallacies became yours; twas a never ending circle of fault

Why is it now that you are caught by the guards for menial wrongdoings

 

Everyday is a straight-face contest; better yet a make-no-eye-contact duel

For we have forgotten how to smile or even compassionately greet one another

Has my absence created a void which you must fill with immoral actions

Or is it that your absence has created non-stop concern and hypochondria in my vast mind

If only the answers to these questions were as clear as your recent charges and consequences

 

Today I observed a fraction of your everyday actions and shall do the same tomorrow

The difference in tomorrow is that I will have shared my point with many readers to analyze

And perhaps you will take a glance of my poetic response to our once-love

Then again does not love never end even when the experience is over?




Copyright © Deidra_Carmichael ... [ 2011-10-04 15:37:05]
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Re: Significant Crimes (User Rating: 1 )
by StacyLynnG on Tuesday, 4th October 2011 @ 07:36:35 PM AEST
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Diedra, wonderful poem, best I have read in quite a while.


Re: Significant Crimes (User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on Wednesday, 5th October 2011 @ 07:57:37 AM AEST
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Beautiful poetry, well constructed and brilliantly written.


Re: Significant Crimes (User Rating: 1 )
by FlintHunter on Monday, 10th October 2011 @ 06:09:41 AM AEST
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'Significant Crimes' is a model of soul-searching nostalgic poetry. It mixes all the emotions of love in one statement. I think it's magnificemt, although I can't also help feeling pain for your suffering. All I can definitely say is that such passionate issues ebb with the years: but then you've lost your youth -- and that isn't great... but there's no alternative :)

--FlintHunter

Contributed by Deidra_Carmichael on Tuesday, October 04 2011 @ 15:37:05 AEST
Topic: Nostalgic Poetry




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