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Array ( [sid] => 167630 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Adoptin [time] => 2011-10-04 14:47:42 [hometext] => Adoption [bodytext] => I now have, a new mom and dad
I feel all alone, and very sad
For years I blocked out , of how I was sold
For two hundred bucks, like a piece of gold
But there is something, that you just don't see
That there is a difference, between gold and me
Gold you can treasure, and wear every day
I can be born, and then given away
Time has past, and now I have grown
How will I make it, all on my own
I guess I will do, the best that I can
Even though life, I don't understand
But someday the memories, will all come back
And I will be the train, that fell of the track [comments] => 1 [counter] => 73 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Trina [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

My Adoptin

Contributed by Trina on Tuesday, 4th October 2011 @ 02:47:42 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I now have, a new mom and dad
I feel all alone, and very sad
For years I blocked out , of how I was sold
For two hundred bucks, like a piece of gold
But there is something, that you just don't see
That there is a difference, between gold and me
Gold you can treasure, and wear every day
I can be born, and then given away
Time has past, and now I have grown
How will I make it, all on my own
I guess I will do, the best that I can
Even though life, I don't understand
But someday the memories, will all come back
And I will be the train, that fell of the track

Copyright © Trina ... [ 2011-10-04 14:47:42]
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Re: My Adoptin (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Saturday, 8th October 2011 @ 01:25:28 PM AEST
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For some life is tough, beats out all the warmth and hope from the mind.
For others, life is a cool breeze on a Summer day, without a care in the world.
I know it's hard to understand sometimes but you should embrace the tough times......they always make you stronger.

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