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[sid] => 16760
[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => )( I spit the wave i ride )(
[time] => 2003-04-30 09:05:00
[hometext] => i am a surfer, the outside is my ambience. This is one of the venues in which i express myself best. Enjoy, by the way, it follows alot of my short poem patterns.
[bodytext] => I spit the wave I ride
I spit the wave I ride I weave in and out of the break -I glide. The water is cool, and is thrown in my face. Its refreshing sensation keeps me at pace. I surf the wave, I hope I’m not doing bad, And if the girls watching laugh, I’ll be sad. I see a shark swimming, seemingly flying near by. I invite him to surf with me, and try To beat me out of the barrel of water And our race’s velocity started to get hotter. I beat him out, I hope it doesn’t deteriorate and die in pride. And euphorically, I spit the wave I ride. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 340 [topic] => 51 [informant] => stateofgray [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Event )
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