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Indolent vampires ravage our daily banks

With broken down smiles cowardly of play

They escape future coveting private eyes

Stock market suckers minus the spine are

Second place servants afraid of what's rare
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A Side of Pity(Minus the Spine)

Contributed by duff on Saturday, 1st October 2011 @ 07:29:53 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Jaded by their own life decision fragility

Indolent vampires ravage our daily banks

With broken down smiles cowardly of play

They escape future coveting private eyes

Stock market suckers minus the spine are

Second place servants afraid of what's rare

Copyright © duff ... [ 2011-10-01 07:29:53]
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Re: A Side of Pity(Minus the Spine) (User Rating: 1 )
by UNORTHODOX on Saturday, 1st October 2011 @ 07:54:42 AM AEST
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I must say -- I hear you -- loud and clear.
So much truth here,
yet many will never know....
I can't elaborate -- any better than you have here.
Well writen -- as you know:
this is not just coincidence....

-UNORTHODOX

Re: A Side of Pity(Minus the Spine) (User Rating: 1 )
by Voyager on Saturday, 1st October 2011 @ 07:58:17 AM AEST
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Great write! I love the unorthodox style of writing as well...got a very off-beat flow to it.....deep words.....truth revealed.....

Re: A Side of Pity(Minus the Spine) (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Monday, 3rd October 2011 @ 12:00:27 AM AEST
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I like how abstract your poems are. It is very artistic.

Re: A Side of Pity(Minus the Spine) (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Monday, 3rd October 2011 @ 12:09:02 PM AEST
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OH DUFF! You should write this on a sign and go march with the 99%! LOVE LOVE LOVE!

ming

Re: A Side of Pity(Minus the Spine) (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie101 on Monday, 3rd October 2011 @ 08:07:28 PM AEST
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If I were to decribe this in one word it would be brilliant. You have some emense talent! Keep writing!:)

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