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I love you for who you are, what you do, what you act like. But the most important thing of life is who you are. Not what you look like but who you are. Even though you are quite handsome that’s not the key. You are one of the best people that I know. I don’t know what I could do with out you. You have great qualities every single one of them. I can tell you’re the one to look up to. You have people following what you do. You glow from the inside-out your handsomeness is not skin deep. It is handsomeness from the inside-out. When ever you smile I smile. With every tear drop that falls from my face I promise a tear drop will fall from my face too. Every night I always pray for you and sometimes when I look back to what we have done I almost cry because I haven’t treated you correctly. That was wrong. Always remember two wrongs DO NOT make a right. It makes another wrong. Sometimes when I am at a friend’s house I can’t stop thinking about how much fun we would have had if I would have stayed home.

If I am in France and you are in Hawaii I will always remember all the time. I just can’t tell you how much I love you. You are a great brother! Thank you for being you. I couldn’t ask for anything better. I have watched you grow and develop over the time. It’s a blessing for you to be on this world, Earth. Have a great 9th Birthday.
Love you Buddy!!!
YOU ROCK ON!!!!!


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You are great

Contributed by jcr8015 on Saturday, 24th September 2011 @ 07:09:49 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems



Know matter how far or close you are. I always will be with you. I will always be with you till the end and then on. You are my brother therefore I have the responsibility for loving you all the time and when you are sad to cheer you up. When you are sad to make you happy and when some one is mean to you not to let the treat you that way. I promise I will not let any one treat you badly. The way that I’ve treated you is wrong. I cannot stop loving you; you are my brother, my best friend, my life, and my soul mate. I will be there for you every step of the way. I love you even though I may be mean to you some times I really do regret it. I love you with every step I make.

I love you for who you are, what you do, what you act like. But the most important thing of life is who you are. Not what you look like but who you are. Even though you are quite handsome that’s not the key. You are one of the best people that I know. I don’t know what I could do with out you. You have great qualities every single one of them. I can tell you’re the one to look up to. You have people following what you do. You glow from the inside-out your handsomeness is not skin deep. It is handsomeness from the inside-out. When ever you smile I smile. With every tear drop that falls from my face I promise a tear drop will fall from my face too. Every night I always pray for you and sometimes when I look back to what we have done I almost cry because I haven’t treated you correctly. That was wrong. Always remember two wrongs DO NOT make a right. It makes another wrong. Sometimes when I am at a friend’s house I can’t stop thinking about how much fun we would have had if I would have stayed home.

If I am in France and you are in Hawaii I will always remember all the time. I just can’t tell you how much I love you. You are a great brother! Thank you for being you. I couldn’t ask for anything better. I have watched you grow and develop over the time. It’s a blessing for you to be on this world, Earth. Have a great 9th Birthday.
Love you Buddy!!!
YOU ROCK ON!!!!!






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by DarkWolf on Tuesday, 27th September 2011 @ 08:41:18 AM AEST
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great write


Re: You are great (User Rating: 1 )
by jcr8015 on Saturday, 8th October 2011 @ 12:06:33 PM AEST
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Comment or mesage me if you think i should make more or what i should write about!!!! Thankyou


Re: You are great (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 2nd November 2011 @ 04:18:54 PM AEST
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Very touching write. Just keep writing.
huggs,
emy




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