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Array ( [sid] => 167472 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Taken Too Soon [time] => 2011-09-24 11:20:29 [hometext] => I still feel the pain [bodytext] => The days we played, giggled and smiled I never once thought you were mine for just a little while.

That night we slept , in the morning I felt the pain

For when I tried to wake you , you weren’t the same,

The air you were to breathe you didn’t remember

Your body laid still as mine started to tremble

The call the flashing lights the pain when they took you from my sight,

Hidden in their shade I took out a blade

The thoughts the screams the little red streams,

The fight within me were lost with my screams,

The room so cold , with the little sliver table

Is where they finally told me they weren’t able to save you

The pain the hurt the fear the tears, yet there still is so many after all of these years

Now all I have left of you are pictures and an urn

Forever will I pray for your return
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 433 [topic] => 48 [informant] => m33sh [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Taken Too Soon

Contributed by m33sh on Saturday, 24th September 2011 @ 11:20:29 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The days we played, giggled and smiled I never once thought you were mine for just a little while.

That night we slept , in the morning I felt the pain

For when I tried to wake you , you weren’t the same,

The air you were to breathe you didn’t remember

Your body laid still as mine started to tremble

The call the flashing lights the pain when they took you from my sight,

Hidden in their shade I took out a blade

The thoughts the screams the little red streams,

The fight within me were lost with my screams,

The room so cold , with the little sliver table

Is where they finally told me they weren’t able to save you

The pain the hurt the fear the tears, yet there still is so many after all of these years

Now all I have left of you are pictures and an urn

Forever will I pray for your return

Copyright Â© m33sh ... [ 2011-09-24 11:20:29]
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Re: Taken Too Soon (User Rating: 1 )
by Korlando3083 on Saturday, 24th September 2011 @ 01:53:27 PM AEST
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Wow. I feel your pain through your writing. I wish you hope, healing and happiness. :)

Re: Taken Too Soon (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Saturday, 24th September 2011 @ 04:31:27 PM AEST
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There is no greater pain. Some day it will hurt less.

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