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[aid] => mick
[title] => The Tenth Crusade
[time] => 2011-09-24 05:28:53
[hometext] => I'd appreciate it if people tell me what they think. Don't be scared to attack this poem, but if you do please offer improvement suggestions. Also, I'd be interested in how people interpret this. Enjoy!
[bodytext] => * * * With a sharp line and fashionably shambolic hair for my arms, Divine approval for my armour, I descend upon the foreign land Of a stranger long studied, But never touched. My quest is a righteous one, For I feel it. Him. The shivers he flows through my body, When I see my Jerusalem over the horizon. Often, I am tempted to surrender. To put down my arms, my faith, To battle an easier conflict. But then I look at you, My big eyed, Soft skinned desire, And march onwards. Hopelessness overlooked. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 33 [informant] => ninety_three [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )
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