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always night never day
Contributed by
pollyamik
on
Wednesday, 21st September 2011 @ 04:54:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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As I sit here at night have all but forgotten about the light.
Drenched in complete darkness surrounded by fear.
My mind circles me I’m not crazy I promise.
But I don’t remember where I am, who I am, or why in here.
I hear a voice from within the night.
‘Help me’ I screamed, as I reach into the darkness.
I can feel no one hear no one.
I’m alone and alone I will stay.
In my mind were its always night and never day.
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pollyamik
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2011-09-21 16:54:13]
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Re: always night never day
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by FlintHunter on
Friday, 23rd September 2011 @ 06:56:50 AM AEST
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'always night never day' is a sad poem -- but I see brightness in it. Just when things are the darkest -- then comes that brightness: you'll see. I can't tell you when the warm light will come, but if you just wait -- and try to remember that things WILL change -- then you'll be that ,uch better off. Meanwhile, as a result of your lonliness and your night-time, you produced a profound poem. Write more. About all subjects. You have talent. Good writing!
FlintHunter
Contributed by pollyamik on Wednesday, September 21 2011 @ 16:54:13 AEST
Topic: Dark Poetry
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