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lost traveler
Contributed by
aulakh
on
Tuesday, 20th September 2011 @ 09:30:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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a painful Legend passes through my eyes
I See an lost traveler Stumbling at night
He is crying with pain and thrust
who is break down his heart
Darkness prevails and no ray of light
Some times he Sway and push by air
his eyes wears dust layer
his life cut off from thread as kite
No one Can trace his sign of feet
an motionless chill will grab his body heat .
In search of love he will lost his Life
he always being wanting for Smile
and Sent with mercilessly on exile
Not a Single word of sympathy will write
at the day break, Storm will calm and still
and lost traveler found dead at hill
no one mourn at the sight
: written by: JATINDER AULAKH
Copyright ©
aulakh
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2011-09-20 09:30:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: lost traveler
(User Rating: 1 ) by FlintHunter on
Tuesday, 20th September 2011 @ 11:50:51 AM AEST (User
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A poem with a special tone; it is dark -- to me -- but somehow not sad. Perhaps it tells the fate of all men -- or perhaps that is my vision of the way things are. At any rate, a beautiful poem with a singular face. Thank you!
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