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Array ( [sid] => 167334 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => enough [time] => 2011-09-11 16:36:41 [hometext] => My heart goes out to those who become so lost they only see one way out. Give them the life line of friendship so they can follow it out of the maze. [bodytext] => enough

I didn’t know him, but I know his brother.
He tried before but this time he did it. It took longer than he planned but the result was the same.

What is it that changes, that makes the end the better option.
I have looked into the abyss, felt dispar and thought that maybe I’d had enough.
But it is not just me, it is all around me.
The ones whom I don’t think about enough and the ones I think about all the time that would suffer, not me.
It is terrifying the moment you realise you are capable of that consideration.
The rope that holds you suddenly seems thin and frayed, you know now that it can snap and that is chilling.

Don’t let it fool you, talk to them, talk to someone, talk to me.
It’s not real and the end wont make it go away. You will just give it to them and you don’t want to do that.
They all want to help if you will only let them, let them in, let them see and you will see that it is not your fault and it will be better.

He is gone now and my thoughts are with his family and friends.
Look out for each other and for yourselves.

http://www.beyondblue.org.au/index.aspx?
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 134 [topic] => 65 [informant] => leondryver [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )
enough

Contributed by leondryver on Sunday, 11th September 2011 @ 04:36:41 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



enough

I didn’t know him, but I know his brother.
He tried before but this time he did it. It took longer than he planned but the result was the same.

What is it that changes, that makes the end the better option.
I have looked into the abyss, felt dispar and thought that maybe I’d had enough.
But it is not just me, it is all around me.
The ones whom I don’t think about enough and the ones I think about all the time that would suffer, not me.
It is terrifying the moment you realise you are capable of that consideration.
The rope that holds you suddenly seems thin and frayed, you know now that it can snap and that is chilling.

Don’t let it fool you, talk to them, talk to someone, talk to me.
It’s not real and the end wont make it go away. You will just give it to them and you don’t want to do that.
They all want to help if you will only let them, let them in, let them see and you will see that it is not your fault and it will be better.

He is gone now and my thoughts are with his family and friends.
Look out for each other and for yourselves.

http://www.beyondblue.org.au/index.aspx?




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Re: enough (User Rating: 1 )
by FlintHunter on Monday, 12th September 2011 @ 06:29:29 AM AEST
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enough

Contributed by leondryver on Sunday, September 11 2011 @ 16:36:41 AEST
Topic: Tough Stuff and Times

You have written a beautiful, and kind, and caring -- message -- to the many who need it. Thank you.

--flinthunter


Re: enough (User Rating: 1 )
by FlintHunter on Monday, 12th September 2011 @ 06:29:29 AM AEST
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enough

Contributed by leondryver on Sunday, September 11 2011 @ 16:36:41 AEST
Topic: Tough Stuff and Times

You have written a beautiful, and kind, and caring -- message -- to the many who need it. Thank you.

--flinthunter




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