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Array ( [sid] => 167303 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Raining night [time] => 2011-09-08 19:01:46 [hometext] => why sadness grabed me? every time. this happened in last winter [bodytext] => Raining night

This is the raining night.
we are too close and
burning candle with thin bright.
Feelings of Warmth and chill going on fight.

At midnight
i open window
cold air comes into room.
How the love sickness
turn into sadness of life.

Save me please save.
I am into dark cave.
o god
Please save.
By. Jatinder aulakh [comments] => 2 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 2 [informant] => aulakh [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Raining night

Contributed by aulakh on Thursday, 8th September 2011 @ 07:01:46 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Raining night

This is the raining night.
we are too close and
burning candle with thin bright.
Feelings of Warmth and chill going on fight.

At midnight
i open window
cold air comes into room.
How the love sickness
turn into sadness of life.

Save me please save.
I am into dark cave.
o god
Please save.
By. Jatinder aulakh




Copyright © aulakh ... [ 2011-09-08 19:01:46]
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Re: Raining night (User Rating: 1 )
by Banjosandwitch on Friday, 9th September 2011 @ 05:26:58 AM AEST
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DEEP SWEET lived the smplicity


Re: Raining night (User Rating: 1 )
by FlintHunter on Friday, 9th September 2011 @ 05:47:25 AM AEST
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What a beautiful and tender poem. It makes me think... I feel the rain and the fire and the sadness and I hear the sad prayer: and i know this is how I feel too. You are writing better and better. Keep writing! --FlintHunter




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