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Array ( [sid] => 167263 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Desires [time] => 2011-09-05 17:15:09 [hometext] => i was having 1 of those dark miinutes n it was cold n rainy n this just popped into my head...its vampiric, love, lust, ...n good writed for a 14 yr old if i say so myself. [bodytext] => A whisper on the wind;
A shadow in the light;
A shiver down my spine;

Desires...

I, helpless,
Hyptonized,
By your beauty,
Stand still,

As you glide,
graceful as I...
Could ever wish to be
stepping, closer,

You make no sound;
You speak no words;
You make no move;
You have no need...

For I am drawn,
like a moth, to a flame,
to you, to your embrace.

Your beauty;
It..., awes me.

I yearn for
the feel...
of your breath;
Your lips.

So strong...
So enchanting...
before you give me...

What I desire...
What we both desire...
I; the kiss of immortality,
You; the sweet, syrupy...
taste of my blood.

I am your drug...
You are mine...
We are...
addicted...
to the taste of each other.

Nevermore, am I helpless...
Nevermore will I worry,
We shall both be together...
...forever...

There is no heaven,
for us...
our kind...

But there is peace,
and as long as we have...
each other...

They will call us...
what they will,
but as long as...
we stay, we live...

We are...
we will always be...
Vampires,
living off each others' desires. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 40 [informant] => AmberAmethyst [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )
Desires

Contributed by AmberAmethyst on Monday, 5th September 2011 @ 05:15:09 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy



A whisper on the wind;
A shadow in the light;
A shiver down my spine;

Desires...

I, helpless,
Hyptonized,
By your beauty,
Stand still,

As you glide,
graceful as I...
Could ever wish to be
stepping, closer,

You make no sound;
You speak no words;
You make no move;
You have no need...

For I am drawn,
like a moth, to a flame,
to you, to your embrace.

Your beauty;
It..., awes me.

I yearn for
the feel...
of your breath;
Your lips.

So strong...
So enchanting...
before you give me...

What I desire...
What we both desire...
I; the kiss of immortality,
You; the sweet, syrupy...
taste of my blood.

I am your drug...
You are mine...
We are...
addicted...
to the taste of each other.

Nevermore, am I helpless...
Nevermore will I worry,
We shall both be together...
...forever...

There is no heaven,
for us...
our kind...

But there is peace,
and as long as we have...
each other...

They will call us...
what they will,
but as long as...
we stay, we live...

We are...
we will always be...
Vampires,
living off each others' desires.




Copyright © AmberAmethyst ... [ 2011-09-05 17:15:09]
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Re: Desires (User Rating: 1 )
by Deidra_Carmichael on Monday, 5th September 2011 @ 05:39:09 PM AEST
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Very artistic and well-written not just for a fourteen-year-old, but for someone in general! I am now reminded of the beloved Twilight Saga and Bella's yearning for Edward's love-not to mention life. Take care and God bless,
Deidra


Re: Desires (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 5th September 2011 @ 05:41:18 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
I agree, great writing for a 14 year old.
Awesome.
blessings, huggs,
emy


Re: Desires (User Rating: 1 )
by Savannah1085 on Thursday, 8th September 2011 @ 09:14:28 PM AEST
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Hey :) Nice poem! Just as it turns out, I am 14 too, and I think this poem is just amazing :) Keep writing, and ttyl :)

-Savvy




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