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Array ( [sid] => 167251 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This Is You and I, Happy [time] => 2011-09-04 22:22:52 [hometext] => Quick write. Relationship poem. [bodytext] => I saw inside your soul
I felt the pain under your skin
I fought for you until I bled

What are we doing?
You lose me every time you say his name...
I stop hearing your words when I open my eyes to see what you're hiding
I don't trust you when you have that look in your eye

I'm holding up my sword, bring on this fight
What am I fighting for?
Why am I fighting for you?
You need me and it's killing me
But I need you, too
This couldn't be love that we're standing here for
We're on different levels, I bow to you
You're strong but insecure
I'm just lost

I am unbelievably happy in my misery
A sick soul, you could say
Or just a twisted fate
Why am I falling for someone like you?
Why are you falling for someone like me?
Hey, everyone thinks we're perfect for one another
But no one knows the pieces on our chess board
It's really a terrible game we're stuck in
But we both love it, I don't know why

All relationships have their problems
Ours have been getting better, though
We screwed up in the start
I couldn't tell you if this is healthy
But it feeds my soul
And this is the happiest that I have ever been
And this is the happiest that you've ever been [comments] => 4 [counter] => 243 [topic] => 2 [informant] => The_Unknown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
This Is You and I, Happy

Contributed by The_Unknown on Sunday, 4th September 2011 @ 10:22:52 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I saw inside your soul
I felt the pain under your skin
I fought for you until I bled

What are we doing?
You lose me every time you say his name...
I stop hearing your words when I open my eyes to see what you're hiding
I don't trust you when you have that look in your eye

I'm holding up my sword, bring on this fight
What am I fighting for?
Why am I fighting for you?
You need me and it's killing me
But I need you, too
This couldn't be love that we're standing here for
We're on different levels, I bow to you
You're strong but insecure
I'm just lost

I am unbelievably happy in my misery
A sick soul, you could say
Or just a twisted fate
Why am I falling for someone like you?
Why are you falling for someone like me?
Hey, everyone thinks we're perfect for one another
But no one knows the pieces on our chess board
It's really a terrible game we're stuck in
But we both love it, I don't know why

All relationships have their problems
Ours have been getting better, though
We screwed up in the start
I couldn't tell you if this is healthy
But it feeds my soul
And this is the happiest that I have ever been
And this is the happiest that you've ever been




Copyright © The_Unknown ... [ 2011-09-04 22:22:52]
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Re: This Is You and I, Happy (User Rating: 1 )
by marsh on Sunday, 4th September 2011 @ 11:38:25 PM AEST
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The well-crafted verse leaves the sweet taste of passion fruit in the mouth. Great stuff. I like the chess game where each of you makes a move. The refrain in the end sums up your lofty feelings.Really it surprises that we should love despite mortal imperfections.MACHARIA[KENYA-EAST AFRICA]


Re: This Is You and I, Happy (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 5th September 2011 @ 11:37:34 AM AEST
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Fantabulas writing.
Very beautiful.
luv ya girl.
emy


Re: This Is You and I, Happy (User Rating: 1 )
by AmberAmethyst on Monday, 5th September 2011 @ 05:30:40 PM AEST
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i love it! its so ....realllistic? idk...maybe im just a sucker for relationship poems...


Re: This Is You and I, Happy (User Rating: 1 )
by LetYourFeelingsOut on Wednesday, 20th March 2013 @ 03:39:16 PM AEST
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this is very sweet i can relate to this kind of relationship in the past and even now i have found out that sometimes you fall in love with the wrong people and nothing can be done ! Beautiful write Love it !




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