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Array ( [sid] => 167232 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the Everyday mans dream [time] => 2011-09-03 21:51:16 [hometext] => one of my first poems written...I hope you like it. [bodytext] => sometimes life breaks you down

sometimes it hurts you,makes an uneasy sound son

its easy to lose love so hold on tight and believe me when I say Id keep it if I found one

this genre is frowned on

it seems the truth is a feeling nobody can fathom

I have a theory that everythings in order

just not the order that you ordered em in

my thoughts are an understatement to the so called glorious men

so I bordered em in

life passes quickly and it seems unfair at times

but thats how the world spins

im more of a man now than I have ever been

but a man none the less

I can withstand more than most

but to some,less

and im not the only one

Ive lost a lot

but im not close to done



Lifes a poem all in its own

if your callin it lies

im sayin hold the phone

we lost control of whats already passed

but we can still change our future before our ultimate crash

am I crazy to write this? if so I hope my insanity lasts

near death but closer to life

the words are ripe but before I can say em,they too lose life

its not right

its not right

they say a true man is willing to fight.... to survive

whats that mean for the ones willing to die?

to live ones dream is an ambiance that every man wanted

or woman

most of us fought for it

some couldnt

some wouldnt

fear struck in at em

couldnt picture failure

so bare in mind their inner concious would get at em

there was a man who once thought of a life

a life with a woman

a woman with a life

who never let an opputunity pass by

a life with a meanin

far beyond any dream

beyond any reality

any reality that most think of as meer conjecture

but he dreamed it and painted the picture

that man became an idol



an idol



that man made a title

everyday mans dream



everyday mans dream



everyday mans dream [comments] => 0 [counter] => 78 [topic] => 19 [informant] => inspiredhearts [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )
the Everyday mans dream

Contributed by inspiredhearts on Saturday, 3rd September 2011 @ 09:51:16 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



sometimes life breaks you down

sometimes it hurts you,makes an uneasy sound son

its easy to lose love so hold on tight and believe me when I say Id keep it if I found one

this genre is frowned on

it seems the truth is a feeling nobody can fathom

I have a theory that everythings in order

just not the order that you ordered em in

my thoughts are an understatement to the so called glorious men

so I bordered em in

life passes quickly and it seems unfair at times

but thats how the world spins

im more of a man now than I have ever been

but a man none the less

I can withstand more than most

but to some,less

and im not the only one

Ive lost a lot

but im not close to done



Lifes a poem all in its own

if your callin it lies

im sayin hold the phone

we lost control of whats already passed

but we can still change our future before our ultimate crash

am I crazy to write this? if so I hope my insanity lasts

near death but closer to life

the words are ripe but before I can say em,they too lose life

its not right

its not right

they say a true man is willing to fight.... to survive

whats that mean for the ones willing to die?

to live ones dream is an ambiance that every man wanted

or woman

most of us fought for it

some couldnt

some wouldnt

fear struck in at em

couldnt picture failure

so bare in mind their inner concious would get at em

there was a man who once thought of a life

a life with a woman

a woman with a life

who never let an opputunity pass by

a life with a meanin

far beyond any dream

beyond any reality

any reality that most think of as meer conjecture

but he dreamed it and painted the picture

that man became an idol



an idol



that man made a title

everyday mans dream



everyday mans dream



everyday mans dream




Copyright © inspiredhearts ... [ 2011-09-03 21:51:16]
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