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you will have to leave Bough
like a yellow peevish Leaf
but life has never end
with the end of hearth beat .
death is only an Halt
get rid old and wear New guise
water and wind never put on
I do not know
what will be I am
where I will stay in Cosmes
in my next Life trip
perhapes god will keep me in your eyes
as a brillient dream
Iwill want to Shine as garland
around your vaccnum nexk
I will wafting your open hair
to be a InSane wind
Definaitly in my next borm life
I will want to be with you
poem by: jatinder aulakh [comments] => 2 [counter] => 119 [topic] => 16 [informant] => aulakh [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

i want to be with you

Contributed by aulakh on Saturday, 3rd September 2011 @ 07:27:42 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

i want to be with you

you will have to leave Bough
like a yellow peevish Leaf
but life has never end
with the end of hearth beat .
death is only an Halt
get rid old and wear New guise
water and wind never put on
I do not know
what will be I am
where I will stay in Cosmes
in my next Life trip
perhapes god will keep me in your eyes
as a brillient dream
Iwill want to Shine as garland
around your vaccnum nexk
I will wafting your open hair
to be a InSane wind
Definaitly in my next borm life
I will want to be with you
poem by: jatinder aulakh

Copyright © aulakh ... [ 2011-09-03 19:27:42]
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Re: i want to be with you (User Rating: 1 )
by FlintHunter on Monday, 5th September 2011 @ 08:30:16 AM AEST
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Dear aulakh,

Thank you for your beautiful and sweet poem. It is a warm and tender thing, and i am particularly drawn to your words about re-incarnation. Keep writing -- don't give up. (A spell-checker is not always reliable -- better to let another person read...) Congratulations -- and thanks for your kindness -- and I hope you will have what you wish for -- in the next life. --flinthunter

p.s. What does 'aulakh' mean? Is it Hindi?

Re: i want to be with you (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 5th September 2011 @ 06:47:37 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Awesome write.
blessings,
emy

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