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Array ( [sid] => 167167 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Better Half [time] => 2011-08-29 16:42:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I've been on my own before, but not once have I felt so alone
It's all so cold, no one to hold, I thought you said you'll never let me go
My heart beats slow, girl I miss you, I just ought to let you know
Since you've been gone, my life has turned into a slideshow
Photo after photo, in my head I'm replaying some of the best memos
It's unfortunate, that with time they all seem to fade, but I refuse and I won't let our love do the same
What some would give for what we had is nothing compare to what I will give to get it back
I'll fight whatever funny looking beast there is, climb the highest mountain just to shout your name on top of it, hell I'll even swim across the farthest ocean if only, you were on the other side of it, whatever it takes to prove my love, I swear I will do it
God forbids someone should dare me, then I'll be forced to show them who's worth all this trouble
And they'll understand, that I have found my unmatched and unequal better half. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 2 [informant] => landsleyalexandre [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
My Better Half

Contributed by landsleyalexandre on Monday, 29th August 2011 @ 04:42:05 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I've been on my own before, but not once have I felt so alone
It's all so cold, no one to hold, I thought you said you'll never let me go
My heart beats slow, girl I miss you, I just ought to let you know
Since you've been gone, my life has turned into a slideshow
Photo after photo, in my head I'm replaying some of the best memos
It's unfortunate, that with time they all seem to fade, but I refuse and I won't let our love do the same
What some would give for what we had is nothing compare to what I will give to get it back
I'll fight whatever funny looking beast there is, climb the highest mountain just to shout your name on top of it, hell I'll even swim across the farthest ocean if only, you were on the other side of it, whatever it takes to prove my love, I swear I will do it
God forbids someone should dare me, then I'll be forced to show them who's worth all this trouble
And they'll understand, that I have found my unmatched and unequal better half.




Copyright © landsleyalexandre ... [ 2011-08-29 16:42:05]
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Re: My Better Half (User Rating: 1 )
by PreciousKitten on Wednesday, 31st August 2011 @ 05:21:46 PM AEST
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i bet she is one lucky lady because that poem was just simply priceless and it made me cry a little. keep writing it was great and beyond it.




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