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[sid] => 167115
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => I FEEL THE RHYTHM
[time] => 2011-08-25 22:32:09
[hometext] => this is a poem describing the sensations i felt when my love was around,but now she is no more,living me dead as if i am in a grave with her,until i begin to accept it.
[bodytext] => Yes I can feel the rhythm of the sun As it shimmers through the pellucid walls of your eyes I can feel the rhythm as it makes body shake I feel it when I stare at your long branched eyelashes Winds blow me away with every glimpse your make I feel the rhythm of the sun as I slide through your side bands Curly as a curling iron can curl Flaky flexible, flexes all the way I feel the rhythm as it takes over me like a strong force I can feel it, with every touch, contact I make My skin screams in desire I can see it dancing in delight A tone of the song overcomes me like a dark cloud I feel it deep, deep within the very mist of darkness And every stare you give gives light Every laugh you made steers things up Into one untwined like two pieces in a pot I can feel the rhythm The sound of your feet makes beside my heart The sound of the beating of your heart elevating beside me As I kneel forward to touch your face Your whole body becomes jealous Screaming in detest Your face feeling like a queen amongst queens Like a crown and a tiara combined I kneel forward to part thi lips As they give way Alarms go of beneath my skin Snakes crawl underneath And the fire lights a match Until I feel the rhythm no more I look back with a thought To the rhythm that was once there but no more Lying beside my corpse I feel no more I am cold at heart Your rhythm I feel no more I cannot tell But only lay beside and die before her eyes Dripping in crystal liquid dropping to the ground Showering my dead corpse in sprinkles almost like rain Then I lay down beneath the ground And darkness feels my tomb No light to makes the birds cry No light to, make my vision crystal clear I am feeling no rhythm………. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 116 [topic] => 22 [informant] => baboloki [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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