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Array ( [sid] => 167057 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Cheater Makes Me Feel Bitter [time] => 2011-08-21 08:12:45 [hometext] => My mind when a cheater rapes, From my net he never escapes, I book him under moral law, He must repent for his flaw. [bodytext] => When you are greatly cheated
Your mind is terribly heated
Your trust gets badly depleted
Your self-confidence is deleted

If you are by someone exploited
This attacks severely your head
Sad emotions strongly flood
Surely boils angrily your blood

When someone cheats you once
Please build the strongest fence
He may view you as a dull dunce
Handle the situation via prudence

He must get a firm intimation
Exhibit your saddest emotion
You must criticize his action
Do this act for self-protection

Prevention of further escalation
Through scanning of relation
May bring you colossal elation
Give bad intention annihilation.

mvvenkataraman

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A Cheater Makes Me Feel Bitter

Contributed by mvvenkataraman on Sunday, 21st August 2011 @ 08:12:45 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

When you are greatly cheated
Your mind is terribly heated
Your trust gets badly depleted
Your self-confidence is deleted

If you are by someone exploited
This attacks severely your head
Sad emotions strongly flood
Surely boils angrily your blood

When someone cheats you once
Please build the strongest fence
He may view you as a dull dunce
Handle the situation via prudence

He must get a firm intimation
Exhibit your saddest emotion
You must criticize his action
Do this act for self-protection

Prevention of further escalation
Through scanning of relation
May bring you colossal elation
Give bad intention annihilation.

mvvenkataraman

SEARCH mvvenkataraman IN GOOGLE OR YAHOO

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Re: A Cheater Makes Me Feel Bitter (User Rating: 1 )
by poeticjestix on Sunday, 21st August 2011 @ 11:12:13 AM AEST
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I get the sentiment and luckily I haven't (knowingly) been cheated - meaning that I don't know the feeling.

Don't take this the wrong way but I think you should doctor this a little in that the structure seems to have been rigidly set out then "exploitation" appears without rhyme, for no apparent reason. Then the structure changes slightly again. I'm no expert, and poetry can be whatever you want it to be, but as you have set out one way it seems to grate a little (for me) when it changes. Just an observation.

Allan

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