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Array ( [sid] => 167019 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Promise. [time] => 2011-08-18 09:01:49 [hometext] => You know those really violent moods you get in? And there's nothing to be violent for really, but you just feel the need for sheer exaggeration and control, power. Well. Guess what? it's one of those moods. [bodytext] => I wish to crucify you to the ground
Till you can hardly breath
And look down at your eyes
As you lay there and heave
I want to drop my weight upon you
And keep you held right there
And tease and torture you
As you are lying bare
And pin you face, side to the ground
And spit fire into your ear
Make every hair stand on end
With something more than fear
I will tangle and torch your emotions
I will set you mentally up in flames
Watch the smoke settle in those eyes
And light you up all over again
This violent treatment is what you deserve
For promises you could never keep
But now my dirty little secret, I have you
I promise, you won’t leave me.
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 6 [informant] => CommasCanSeperate [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
I Promise.

Contributed by CommasCanSeperate on Thursday, 18th August 2011 @ 09:01:49 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



I wish to crucify you to the ground
Till you can hardly breath
And look down at your eyes
As you lay there and heave
I want to drop my weight upon you
And keep you held right there
And tease and torture you
As you are lying bare
And pin you face, side to the ground
And spit fire into your ear
Make every hair stand on end
With something more than fear
I will tangle and torch your emotions
I will set you mentally up in flames
Watch the smoke settle in those eyes
And light you up all over again
This violent treatment is what you deserve
For promises you could never keep
But now my dirty little secret, I have you
I promise, you won’t leave me.




Copyright © CommasCanSeperate ... [ 2011-08-18 09:01:49]
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Re: I Promise. (User Rating: 1 )
by bigj on Thursday, 18th August 2011 @ 10:07:47 PM AEST
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To express dark emotions so vividly is wonderful. Love the write, even though it's twisted and dark, but aren't we all when we live In anger, we may not express it, but we do think it.


Re: I Promise. (User Rating: 1 )
by poeticjestix on Friday, 19th August 2011 @ 02:24:03 PM AEST
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what is this? a job application for a care worker in a childrens home.


Re: I Promise. (User Rating: 1 )
by poeticjestix on Friday, 19th August 2011 @ 02:28:25 PM AEST
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Please accept My apologies. This is dark and angry and well put together


Re: I Promise. (User Rating: 1 )
by Aspirant on Sunday, 21st August 2011 @ 12:34:01 AM AEST
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No, I don't quite know those moods, which makes this write all the more interesting to me.


Re: I Promise. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th October 2011 @ 03:33:14 AM AEST
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i'm glad i'm not the only one who gets in these dark moods!! i know what you mean. i really liked this poem. you have talent. you get your feelings out, and put them in the places they should be in.




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