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She breathes in the air
The salty sea, the foamy waves
Wind flowing through her hair

She sings a song for her love
To come and take her away
A golden siren, waiting calmly
Waiting, longing for that day

I remember I passed her once
Standing on the cliff
Her voice was soft, it echoed out
And not a foot would she lift

Through rain or shine she stood
Upon the rocky ledge
A smile implanted upon her face
Her soul to him she pledged

Some say she still stands there
Waiting patiently for her love
Still he has not come for her
He's watching from above [comments] => 3 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 48 [informant] => wilder [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Waiting For...

Contributed by wilder on Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Standing on the cliff-edge
She breathes in the air
The salty sea, the foamy waves
Wind flowing through her hair

She sings a song for her love
To come and take her away
A golden siren, waiting calmly
Waiting, longing for that day

I remember I passed her once
Standing on the cliff
Her voice was soft, it echoed out
And not a foot would she lift

Through rain or shine she stood
Upon the rocky ledge
A smile implanted upon her face
Her soul to him she pledged

Some say she still stands there
Waiting patiently for her love
Still he has not come for her
He's watching from above

Copyright © wilder ... [ 2003-04-29 10:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Waiting For... (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 03:02:38 PM AEST
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I can see her vividly
I can hear her voice
understand her tradgedy
understand her choice

The one for whom she waits
comes to us all in time
to join us with those gone before
in after-life sublime.

Re: Waiting For... (User Rating: 1 )
by WordPoet on Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 04:37:48 PM AEST
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What a lovely poem, tinged with sadness and written in a manner that is easily visualized in both the heart and the mind.

Very well done.

Re: Waiting For... (User Rating: 1 )
by lilch4ever on Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 11:05:30 PM AEST
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Good poem and very nicely written.

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