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Thinking to myself it's all your fault, beating myself up and about to bawl.
Just thinking about you sitting all alone, wanting to hear your voice but I can't pick up the phone.
I know I made a huge mistake, but I don't know how much more pain I can take.
You were all I needed, but I got up and left you, I'm so sorry you know you were my boo.
Years and years your going to be gone, it's like a bad dream, a sad ending to a song.
There are going to be bad days, times you can't deal, but you know I'm always here for you everyday, especially when your heart finally starts to feel.
You might think that Iv let you down, but Iv always been here, just had to get my head to clear.
Whenever you need me I'm just a letter away, I really believe everythings going to be okay! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 139 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Charity_robinson61501 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
I'm sorry

Contributed by Charity_robinson61501 on Wednesday, 17th August 2011 @ 12:51:10 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Laying here wishing that you were here, blaming myself with each and every tear.
Thinking to myself it's all your fault, beating myself up and about to bawl.
Just thinking about you sitting all alone, wanting to hear your voice but I can't pick up the phone.
I know I made a huge mistake, but I don't know how much more pain I can take.
You were all I needed, but I got up and left you, I'm so sorry you know you were my boo.
Years and years your going to be gone, it's like a bad dream, a sad ending to a song.
There are going to be bad days, times you can't deal, but you know I'm always here for you everyday, especially when your heart finally starts to feel.
You might think that Iv let you down, but Iv always been here, just had to get my head to clear.
Whenever you need me I'm just a letter away, I really believe everythings going to be okay!




Copyright © Charity_robinson61501 ... [ 2011-08-17 00:51:10]
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Re: I'm sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by maidinlancashire on Wednesday, 17th August 2011 @ 03:07:04 PM AEST
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You write with hurt and mistakes, don't know what you've got till it's gone,( as the song goes) but we can all see the mistakes we make after the event, life is full of regrets,things happen for a reason i always think. Your poem is personal from experience, and by the wording fresh in your mind. Although not sure if all the lines run smoothly ? a bit jarring. I like a soft flow to poetry, thats just me, i can feel the pain in your poem so that is a positive, you drag me into your sorrow. xx


Re: I'm sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 25th August 2011 @ 02:01:45 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Really good writing.
blessings,
emy




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