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[sid] => 166992
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => I Wish I Was A Dreamer
[time] => 2011-08-14 16:05:14
[hometext] => The story of this poem is pretty obvious, it's about someone who wishes they could have the dreams people usually have, but they just cant. This is my first poem and I'm still young so would love some constructice critism
[bodytext] => I wish I was a dreamer Life seems better with dreams Not everything is as it seems I wish I could just slip deep into thought To become the big film star, leading guitarist, the lot I wish I could take myself away from the world Even just for one hour I'd imagine myself with the most beautiful girl But I know I can't, I just don't have the power There's no escape route I have found So I'll stay with my feet firmly on the ground In my fate I have no say I'll have to accept it day-by-day Until the day I pass away. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 117 [topic] => 14 [informant] => Hutchy [notes] => Corrected spelling as requested ~ Moderator_18 Aug 15, 2011 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )
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