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Really Real?

Contributed by CommasCanSeperate on Saturday, 13th August 2011 @ 04:41:54 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I doubt my words mean much to you
I’m sorry I can’t be of help
I’m not sure if the thanks are real
But I’ll be here for every step.
People say I have no patience
Though I get ignored for periods of time
It never stops going through my head
I could help you much more if you were mine.
You ripped my heart and soul to pieces
My mind thought it’d be fun to join in
So for the fragile two weeks
I could feel nothing but pain.
I tried putting on the brave face
I’m just fine, screw you
But inside it was tearing me apart
Like it’s doing to you too.
I wish I had all the confidence
For then maybe I could help you more
And I wish you didn’t love all those other girls
Because inside they are backstabbing whores.
Of course I could be totally wrong
I take back what I say
But can you not pay attention to the one that genuine
Genuine and full of jealousy.
It’s always been like this for me
I makes me happy to try and heal
It’s covered up by my dirty streaks
But it’s just me and the way I feel.
I wish I could tear down everyone’s mask
And show you who they all pretend to be
And just maybe at that point
You’d start to talk to me.
Move along the track of devastation
My hand is always here
When you fall to the pits with no going back
You’ll find out who is real.




Copyright © CommasCanSeperate ... [ 2011-08-13 04:41:54]
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Re: Really Real? (User Rating: 1 )
by SUMMERGIRL2011 on Tuesday, 16th August 2011 @ 08:15:38 PM AEST
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THANK YOU FOR FINALLY PUTTING WHAT I FEEL INTO WORDS! I HOPE EVERY THING WORKS OUT




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