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But let me first get rid of this artificial and start
From scratch, because I kind of look like a chaotic piece of art
I've been stuck in a frame with my back against the wall
But no more, because I am coming out of this picture, with colors brighter than any rainbows
I'll be the sunshine, better yet I'll be that light, which will illuminates your cloudy thoughts
Won't acknowledge me, so you left me in the dark, fighting shadows
Blinded, wished I fell apart, but instead I am binding every pieces of myself
And molding each into a masterpiece, so strong I feel like Hercules
I am alive, I have killed the beast, watched it bleed, murdered, feels like a tragedy
The old me, with a brand new heart, I am giving birth to poetry. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 19 [informant] => landsleyalexandre [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

A Brand New Me

Contributed by landsleyalexandre on Sunday, 7th August 2011 @ 04:50:46 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

I am building myself a brand new heart
But let me first get rid of this artificial and start
From scratch, because I kind of look like a chaotic piece of art
I've been stuck in a frame with my back against the wall
But no more, because I am coming out of this picture, with colors brighter than any rainbows
I'll be the sunshine, better yet I'll be that light, which will illuminates your cloudy thoughts
Won't acknowledge me, so you left me in the dark, fighting shadows
Blinded, wished I fell apart, but instead I am binding every pieces of myself
And molding each into a masterpiece, so strong I feel like Hercules
I am alive, I have killed the beast, watched it bleed, murdered, feels like a tragedy
The old me, with a brand new heart, I am giving birth to poetry.

Copyright © landsleyalexandre ... [ 2011-08-07 16:50:46]
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Re: A Brand New Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ShambalaMoon on Sunday, 7th August 2011 @ 05:20:50 PM AEST
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Inspirational excellence!
The reader feels compelled to their own greatness for your wonderful words...
I dig this tremendously!

~OneLove~

Re: A Brand New Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Banjosandwitch on Monday, 8th August 2011 @ 07:12:41 AM AEST
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well cool want more

Re: A Brand New Me (User Rating: 1 )
by julesxo on Friday, 12th August 2011 @ 02:54:33 PM AEST
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i legitimately love this! i feel so inspired by it and i can definitely relate. keep up the good work!

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