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as she dives for pieces of my thoughts,
broad daylight baited silence,
the world left to shock

In retrospect my words were clear,
but it seems there is still question;
either no one can see, believes,
or even cares,that I lost my mind,
in a courageous effort to expose repugnance

It seems this fate upon you,
is welcomed ,as you bask;in hatred,denial,
and ignorant pride,while shadows;
shape like masters,
still poisoning subconscience

From my grave I shift,
as the plan is nearly stone complete,
did I leave this world in vain,
or will the movement stave defeat,
it's the machine that must be shut down,
and the kings removed of crown,
for the clock is tic, tic ,ticking,
purging freedom. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 307 [topic] => 64 [informant] => unorthodox [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )

Message from the grave

Contributed by unorthodox on Saturday, 6th August 2011 @ 12:05:14 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

Pb through my head,
as she dives for pieces of my thoughts,
broad daylight baited silence,
the world left to shock

In retrospect my words were clear,
but it seems there is still question;
either no one can see, believes,
or even cares,that I lost my mind,
in a courageous effort to expose repugnance

It seems this fate upon you,
is welcomed ,as you bask;in hatred,denial,
and ignorant pride,while shadows;
shape like masters,
still poisoning subconscience

From my grave I shift,
as the plan is nearly stone complete,
did I leave this world in vain,
or will the movement stave defeat,
it's the machine that must be shut down,
and the kings removed of crown,
for the clock is tic, tic ,ticking,
purging freedom.

Copyright © unorthodox ... [ 2011-08-06 12:05:14]
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Re: Message from the grave (User Rating: 1 )
by CommasCanSeperate on Saturday, 6th August 2011 @ 03:15:24 PM AEST
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really like the way it's so randomly written and put out, fantastic write, x

Re: Message from the grave (User Rating: 1 )
by Aspirant on Saturday, 6th August 2011 @ 08:09:55 PM AEST
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Your feelings are common but the content isn't clear. Whatever it is, you've captured something powerful in this verse. Well done!

Re: Message from the grave (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Wednesday, 10th August 2011 @ 12:46:32 AM AEST
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Heavy and provocative leaving us to sort the rest out...profound linings that scratch at the core of what is present and how the future looks so sad...great write my friend

duff

Re: Message from the grave (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Thursday, 11th August 2011 @ 09:28:26 AM AEST
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I felt you backing away from the sheeple mentality with full warning and thus causing confusion to a certain few. We poets are at times a blunt lot with subtle dark feelings. Great write...

ming

Re: Message from the grave (User Rating: 1 )
by angelabella on Saturday, 20th August 2011 @ 01:45:08 AM AEST
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I don't really understand it....but there's some kind of feeling in it that really gets into...:)

Re: Message from the grave (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Saturday, 11th August 2012 @ 12:41:50 AM AEST
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I must say this type of poetry you write is
Something different than I'm use to
Like a deep poetic ramblings of the mind
I simply love it. I am a fan of your work
Now
Loved it

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