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fatefully crashed

Contributed by stateofgray on Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Crash-
I lost myself, i blinked in a second
I crashed.
I let my guard down while I blinked
and lost my vehicle when it smashed.

I lost whats most important
what got me this far.
I wonder where it is my vehicle went
as i paradoxically drive my car.

my car-not vehicle
are driving, okay
Finding the person who I crashed
Finding once again, gone, my way.

I lost it in this accident
when i bumped into her.
It wasn't a bump, but more a massive hit
and at her sight i cur.

Here i am , I lost the vehicle
that i came in ; riding
And wherever she might go, unknowingly,
with her is my vehicle, striding.

I drive and search for her
who serendipitously crashed into me.
As i drive, i think that the design of my vehicle
was not mine, anyway, to be.

I crashed, I was such an idiot though!
Why did i have to hit her so hard.
I lost, what i most protected!
As i put down my guard.

My vehicle is with her,i found myself
I thought my vehicle was everything i had to lose.
However it wasn't and now i have
the will and power to do what I choose.

I haven't found her yet though
in the midst of all the trash.
I will find her again, regardless
and take whats fatefully mine from the crash.




Copyright © stateofgray ... [ 2003-04-29 06:35:00]
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Re: fatefully crashed (User Rating: 1 )
by faffeee on Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 06:47:48 AM AEST
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very very clever metaphor, i really enjoyed it. it was good to discover more and more as i read along. xxx


Re: fatefully crashed (User Rating: 1 )
by princesspurty on Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 04:29:15 PM AEST
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very nice!!!!!!!!




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