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Before I Close My Eyes
Contributed by
brialuv
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Friday, 5th August 2011 @ 10:03:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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A tornado wrapped around my thoughts
As my head rests on my pillow
And I gaze up at the ceiling
I find this thought creeping upon me
Where are you out there
Are you thinking of me?
Or are you thinking about how your going to be holding her like you once held me
As one tear falls
I find the strength to catch it and wipe it away
But the tears begin to unwillingly fall anyway
As I taste the mixture of salt and heartbreak
What a disgusting taste it is
Leaving tear stains on my pillow
The feeling is even worse
You loving someone else that's not me
Slowly as I drift off to sleep
Before I close my eyes
The now nonexistent image of us resorts in the back of my mind.
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brialuv
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2011-08-05 10:03:46]
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Re: Before I Close My Eyes
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 5th August 2011 @ 03:04:28 PM AEST
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You've captured the sense of frustration and loss in this.
Relationships are complicated.
Maybe we all need a guide book on how to succeed with them!!
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