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Don't
Contributed by
DoubleS
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Thursday, 4th August 2011 @ 07:56:39 PM in AEST
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This is actually my first poem that doesn't really rhyme to much... but I think it is still a good read... P.S. Sorry if seeing the word don't so many times gives you a seizure L.O.L.. Almost gave me one...
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Don't forget what we are.
Don't forget who you are
Don't lose track of life
Don't leave it on the edge
Don't love me, or hate me.
Don't remember me, or forget me.
Don't lose me, or find me.
Don't kill me, or save me.
Don't be me, or become me.
Don't blame me, or the world.
Don't say goodbye, or hello.
Don't get mad, just be happy
We are what we are.
We do what we do.
But don't forget the past.
And I won't forget you.
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DoubleS
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2011-08-04 19:56:39]
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Re: Don't
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by emystar on
Thursday, 4th August 2011 @ 10:42:18 PM AEST
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It's good writing and Some people never rhyme.
Good job. Blessings,
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Re: Don't
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by Waynster on
Saturday, 6th August 2011 @ 06:46:46 AM AEST
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Hello, First of all, do not judge yourself and explain to others! When you write, let it come from the heart and allow others to be the judge and usually you will find what you write is awesome.
Secondly, this poem you wrote is very good. I really liked reading it. Not everyones poems ryme and in fact they don't always have to. Some poems i read do not even make sense. What you wrote makes much sens and blends well. Try to google (types of poetry) and you can read and learn the different styles and find what is best for you. Keep up the good work.
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