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You’re a two bit back stabber
You’re a fake and a plebe
You’re a wannabe
You’re a no mark
You’re sad and fake

I thought we had a friendship
I thought we got along
But you’re a faker
You where just playing a game
I don’t roll with that
You’re a two bit fake, get lost!

Never when I’m there did you voice an opinion to my actions
But soon as I was gone
Your fake side couldn’t hold back
You wanted me gone
You are a fool
I have seen the light
You back stabber, be gone

By banjosandwitch 03/08/11
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Two bit fake

Contributed by banjosandwitch on Wednesday, 3rd August 2011 @ 06:28:48 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Two bit fake

You’re a two bit back stabber
You’re a fake and a plebe
You’re a wannabe
You’re a no mark
You’re sad and fake

I thought we had a friendship
I thought we got along
But you’re a faker
You where just playing a game
I don’t roll with that
You’re a two bit fake, get lost!

Never when I’m there did you voice an opinion to my actions
But soon as I was gone
Your fake side couldn’t hold back
You wanted me gone
You are a fool
I have seen the light
You back stabber, be gone

By banjosandwitch 03/08/11




Copyright © banjosandwitch ... [ 2011-08-03 06:28:48]
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Re: Two bit fake (User Rating: 1 )
by Deidra_Carmichael on Wednesday, 3rd August 2011 @ 12:38:42 PM AEST
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Very emotionally intense! I can feel the anger with every word I read. Great job on making this really powerful and may you be comforted,
Deidra


Re: Two bit fake (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Wednesday, 3rd August 2011 @ 04:08:19 PM AEST
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Some people are real, and some are fake, and its hard to tell the difference sometimes.


Re: Two bit fake (User Rating: 1 )
by ShambalaMoon on Thursday, 4th August 2011 @ 06:17:28 PM AEST
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Wowserz!
I sure hope this write acted as a catharsis of sorts for you, Doll...

~OneLove~


Re: Two bit fake (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 5th August 2011 @ 02:54:30 AM AEST
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You got this 100% right.
I can totally relate.
blessings,
emy


Re: Two bit fake (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 5th August 2011 @ 02:53:46 PM AEST
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Full of intensity and anger this one.
I like the way you have drawn it out through the way this is written
Good work.

Steve




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