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Sitting along the shore oh so peaceful it is
Majestic waves and their soothing motions so serene
As the sun beats down on me I ask myself
What more could I possibly desire?

Unfortunately a whole lot more is the answer
For I tend to feel alone without my beloved companion
He is over yonder cruising the glorious sea
Stopping by now and then to check on me

Little does he know a day at the beach gets old
I will eventually grow bored and need a friend
I wonder if my beloved friend realizes how I crave romance
Rather than just a hello and a passing glance [comments] => 3 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 14 [informant] => Deidra_Carmichael [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

A Day at the Beach

Contributed by Deidra_Carmichael on Sunday, 31st July 2011 @ 03:34:13 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

A day at the beach

Sitting along the shore oh so peaceful it is
Majestic waves and their soothing motions so serene
As the sun beats down on me I ask myself
What more could I possibly desire?

Unfortunately a whole lot more is the answer
For I tend to feel alone without my beloved companion
He is over yonder cruising the glorious sea
Stopping by now and then to check on me

Little does he know a day at the beach gets old
I will eventually grow bored and need a friend
I wonder if my beloved friend realizes how I crave romance
Rather than just a hello and a passing glance

Copyright © Deidra_Carmichael ... [ 2011-07-31 15:34:13]
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Re: A Day at the Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 31st July 2011 @ 05:46:32 PM AEST
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Great writing.
Blessings

Re: A Day at the Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Sunday, 31st July 2011 @ 11:49:31 PM AEST
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we all crave romance when we are single. you should let him know how you feel.

Re: A Day at the Beach (User Rating: 1 )
by DrcGaimer on Tuesday, 2nd August 2011 @ 01:50:10 PM AEST
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I like this. Your expression quickly connects with the reader and causes them to feel for your situation. Great write.

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