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Array ( [sid] => 166893 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If I Was There [time] => 2011-07-30 07:11:59 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She sits alone with only her tears to comfort her.
Why they flow, only she would know.
She sits alone, thinking about life and what is next for her.
Why it is this way, only she would know.
She sits there with no one to comfort her,
no one to wipe her tears.
If I was there, I would do that.
If I was there, she would never cry again.
As least not unless it was on my shoulder.
If I was there, she'd never be alone again.
I would be there with her until I die.
If I could give her anything, I'd bring her joy.
If I could take away anything, I'd take her pain.
If I was there, she'd never be alone again.
If I was there, she would have someone to talk to,
someone to laugh with, someone to make fun of.
She would smile more often,
Her eyes would shine brighter.
If I was there.
My heart belongs to her, so I'm really not that far.
My soul still mingles with hers, so I'm really always near.
But as far as she can see, she's all alone.
But if I could have my way,
she would never be alone again.
If I was there.
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If I Was There

Contributed by whiteleo1984 on Saturday, 30th July 2011 @ 07:11:59 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



She sits alone with only her tears to comfort her.
Why they flow, only she would know.
She sits alone, thinking about life and what is next for her.
Why it is this way, only she would know.
She sits there with no one to comfort her,
no one to wipe her tears.
If I was there, I would do that.
If I was there, she would never cry again.
As least not unless it was on my shoulder.
If I was there, she'd never be alone again.
I would be there with her until I die.
If I could give her anything, I'd bring her joy.
If I could take away anything, I'd take her pain.
If I was there, she'd never be alone again.
If I was there, she would have someone to talk to,
someone to laugh with, someone to make fun of.
She would smile more often,
Her eyes would shine brighter.
If I was there.
My heart belongs to her, so I'm really not that far.
My soul still mingles with hers, so I'm really always near.
But as far as she can see, she's all alone.
But if I could have my way,
she would never be alone again.
If I was there.




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Re: If I Was There (User Rating: 1 )
by Deidra_Carmichael on Saturday, 30th July 2011 @ 07:12:22 PM AEST
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Oh wow! I seem to relate with the lonely girl since I too have an admirer but I feel like he admires his Mercedes and friends more than me. Yet at the same time he claims I'm his everything and that he loves me. Take care and God bless,
Deidra


Re: If I Was There (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 30th July 2011 @ 07:18:05 PM AEST
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If she reads this beautiful write she'll be coming to you.
Great, sweet, write.
Blessings, huggs,
emy
If she don't she's nuts.


Re: If I Was There (User Rating: 1 )
by vikki on Monday, 1st August 2011 @ 09:25:15 AM AEST
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Simply awesome .....




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