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Array ( [sid] => 166860 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Consider Your Wish Granted [time] => 2011-07-25 16:39:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I have vanished from his precious memory

Disappeared from everything tangible and communication has been lost

To see my face would be a miracle for your prized jewel so young yet clever

And now that there is a blockade created unmovable consider your wish granted

No more conversations for you to overhear wondering what could be sent over the line

To capture an adolescent's attention being it is not his that you are receiving all this time

Conflict is thrust among us all and now it is your decision that has been made

"Get rid of her! She is no good for you" is what you argue with his denying heart

And now that you have your way I am as a ghost-not existing in his present-day life

Happy now? Consider your wish granted

But don't worry for me after all such a hurt can heal with he same love that hurts

Perhaps you were help in disguise for me to find someone more suitable

Ah yes, I have been set free from the shackles of forbidden love

All you wanted was for your precious one to be safe and secure

Consider your wish Granted [comments] => 2 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 52 [informant] => Deidra_Carmichael [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Consider Your Wish Granted

Contributed by Deidra_Carmichael on Monday, 25th July 2011 @ 04:39:05 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

I have vanished from his precious memory

Disappeared from everything tangible and communication has been lost

To see my face would be a miracle for your prized jewel so young yet clever

And now that there is a blockade created unmovable consider your wish granted

No more conversations for you to overhear wondering what could be sent over the line

To capture an adolescent's attention being it is not his that you are receiving all this time

Conflict is thrust among us all and now it is your decision that has been made

"Get rid of her! She is no good for you" is what you argue with his denying heart

And now that you have your way I am as a ghost-not existing in his present-day life

Happy now? Consider your wish granted

But don't worry for me after all such a hurt can heal with he same love that hurts

Perhaps you were help in disguise for me to find someone more suitable

Ah yes, I have been set free from the shackles of forbidden love

All you wanted was for your precious one to be safe and secure

Consider your wish Granted

Copyright Â© Deidra_Carmichael ... [ 2011-07-25 16:39:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Consider Your Wish Granted (User Rating: 1 )
by Deidra_Carmichael on Tuesday, 26th July 2011 @ 04:57:47 PM AEST
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Does anybody have trouble understanding this poem? If so, allow memto explain I wrote this about my exboyfriend's mother cutting me off from his life since she did not get to know me that well.

Re: Consider Your Wish Granted (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 28th July 2011 @ 05:59:15 AM AEST
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I think often the only one who really truly understands the depth of a poem is the author.
However, I can still appreciate the way it has been crafted and how beautifully it flows.
Nice work.

Steve

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