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A Poem For Us

Contributed by DoubleS on Tuesday, 19th July 2011 @ 12:16:47 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



As a head's up, most parts are uneven, it may seem different too some people, but to me it is beautiful, because it is truth put into thought...

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(The Opener)

As time moves slowly
Around you and me,
Not a sound speaks clearly
Through the endless sea.

Pt. I (Reality)

There were times in my life
I wasn’t too sure,
But when I met you
I knew love was pure.

Your eyes are what caught me
A light shade of brown,
I got lost in the world
With the feeling of falling down.

I awoke within seconds
Which felt more like days,
And I looked once again
With something to say.

I stated I love you
Even more every day,
So smart, so funny
Perfect in every way.

Pt. II (Dream)

That night I had a dream
About a small wedding,
It was ours, so wonderful
It was held in the spring.

The girls they wore purple
The color of you,
The men they wore red
Showing my love for you.

As you come down the isle
Not a face was dry,
Including my own
As I began to cry.

I was happy not sad
I felt good in a way,
I was happy for you
On our special day.

Your dress so beautiful
Like you every day,
“Your hair in the sun
Is lovely by the way.”

Pt. III (Speech)

I have written a speech
To read to you all,
Of memories and moments
Some may recall.

“My love, my dear
Do you remember the time,
When I first took your hand
And knew you were mine

Or maybe the time
I wanted to hold you,
And even the time
I just couldn’t leave you.

Do you remember where
We had our first kiss,
The moments of love
The moments like this.

I remember it all
I know you do too,
Because you are me
As I am still you.

We share the same heart
Of love and passion,
We share the same soul
And even compassion.

The love that we have
Is stronger that life,
If that is wrong
Then what is right.


I’ll hold you when you’re sad
I cry when you’re sad,
I will love you forever
Even when times are bad.

When I hold you in my arms
Everything is in its place,
I know who I love
When I look at your face.

And now we are one
Forever you and I,
I promise I will love you
Until the day I die.”

Pt. IV (Kiss)

So now you are reading this
My guess you are crying,
You’re leaning on my shoulder
There is no denying.

There’s one way to end this
It’s something you won’t miss,
Because the way to end this
Is with a simple _ _ _ _.

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Also feel free to add what parts you liked best... I like reading those kinds of comments... it gives me hope that this is a good poem for the poetry world...




Copyright © DoubleS ... [ 2011-07-19 00:16:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: A Poem For Us (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 19th July 2011 @ 01:16:59 AM AEST
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Really good, creative writing.
Blessings,
emy
It's good to have you posting again.




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