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Some say well how is it possible that what we want doesn't matter?
Or how is there a plot to take what we've got and how could anyone be so cruel?.Just think of the man who lost half his head,after his beautiful attempt to enlighten us (he's dead)!

Those who oppose and have the pull to expose what's in the hidden hand,with authority and dignity, who you can trust is telling you the truth,who truly opposes
(not just some drone on the tube,with a smile and his finger on the trigger)
do you really think he's alive and well?but it's all immaterial for the outcome's the same,as long as you're enjoying the big show.

Keep applauding things you can believe in, for the man who lost half his head is dead! and the show must go on, brought to you ,by one the world's convinced doesn't exist,all hail deception for it's encrypted through cultures, houses painted white with elite aerial view, and flashing screen's hypnotic scenes.but it's all immaterial for the outcome's the same as long as you're enjoying the big show. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 250 [topic] => 31 [informant] => unorthodox [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
Schizo Rambling

Contributed by unorthodox on Wednesday, 13th July 2011 @ 10:31:43 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



Oh how amusing is the big show,two sides competing for the right to make choices for you. I once watched a movie from the 40's ,where some men sat in a room with two candidates in mind, and one man say's this is who's going to win the election, that was in the 40's, or maybe I'm just making this up? Well that's immaterial for the outcome's the same, as long as you're enjoying the big show.

Some say well how is it possible that what we want doesn't matter?
Or how is there a plot to take what we've got and how could anyone be so cruel?.Just think of the man who lost half his head,after his beautiful attempt to enlighten us (he's dead)!

Those who oppose and have the pull to expose what's in the hidden hand,with authority and dignity, who you can trust is telling you the truth,who truly opposes
(not just some drone on the tube,with a smile and his finger on the trigger)
do you really think he's alive and well?but it's all immaterial for the outcome's the same,as long as you're enjoying the big show.

Keep applauding things you can believe in, for the man who lost half his head is dead! and the show must go on, brought to you ,by one the world's convinced doesn't exist,all hail deception for it's encrypted through cultures, houses painted white with elite aerial view, and flashing screen's hypnotic scenes.but it's all immaterial for the outcome's the same as long as you're enjoying the big show.




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Re: Schizo Rambling (User Rating: 1 )
by Deidra_Carmichael on Wednesday, 13th July 2011 @ 11:31:39 AM AEST
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Well I must say this has so much truth behind it! Very abstract to one at first yet there are virtues embedded within. Ironically this write reminds me of 1984 by George Orwell (Winston Smith's attempt to destroy Big Brother and Communismm altogether). Thanks for posting and keep writing,
Deidra


Re: Schizo Rambling (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Friday, 15th July 2011 @ 11:51:47 AM AEST
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This makes me want to turn your ramble (far from schizo, IMHO) into my own poem. So thank you for being the muse to keep my files (brain) flipping!


ming


Re: Schizo Rambling (User Rating: 1 )
by ShambalaMoon on Saturday, 16th July 2011 @ 10:41:52 AM AEST
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Hmmm...interesting...
Although, you might wanna re~diagnose
your title, as, I believe...
this ramble was far more Manic than Schizo
*evil grin*

OneLove


Re: Schizo Rambling (User Rating: 1 )
by desire on Saturday, 11th August 2012 @ 12:57:14 AM AEST
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This is simply theTRUTH. That people don't want
To talk about. It's all going on in the world today
If people are paying attention to things being said
Nothing schizo about that. Brilliantly written
Thanks so Much for sharing




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