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Array ( [sid] => 166734 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Expulsive/Retentive [time] => 2011-07-09 15:13:42 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My capacities
Dont have enough conviction
I am to impulsive; its like an addiction
same with my disorganization thats always spreading like a disease.

And behind them I stand with ambition
But I can't find the damn erudition
So I just scream and hammer my fist against the door
Filled with defiance and a ferocious roar
/
You on the other hand,
will probably get through the door and reach your goal
cause every move you make is a part of your carefully considered plan
you leave not a stone unchecked when you are in control

But sometimes obsessive meticulousness doesnt bear fruit
So the time you waste is astronomic
Plus you submissive nature makes you incapable of setting a dispute
Ýou can get through, but you can never get anywhere quick.

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 59 [informant] => zeberdee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )

ExpulsiveRetentive

Contributed by zeberdee on Saturday, 9th July 2011 @ 03:13:42 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

My capacities
Dont have enough conviction
I am to impulsive; its like an addiction
same with my disorganization thats always spreading like a disease.

And behind them I stand with ambition
But I can't find the damn erudition
So I just scream and hammer my fist against the door
Filled with defiance and a ferocious roar
/
You on the other hand,
will probably get through the door and reach your goal
cause every move you make is a part of your carefully considered plan
you leave not a stone unchecked when you are in control

But sometimes obsessive meticulousness doesnt bear fruit
So the time you waste is astronomic
Plus you submissive nature makes you incapable of setting a dispute
Ýou can get through, but you can never get anywhere quick.

Copyright Â© zeberdee ... [ 2011-07-09 15:13:42]
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Re: ExpulsiveRetentive (User Rating: 1 )
by poeticjestix on Saturday, 9th July 2011 @ 04:00:38 PM AEST
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honest and clumsy v cunning

Re: ExpulsiveRetentive (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Monday, 11th July 2011 @ 01:03:25 PM AEST
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Being meticulous often does take up too much time that could better be spent doing more important things.

Unfortunately many intelligent people fall into this pattern.

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