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What once was

Contributed by dezchapm on Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 10:48:03 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

What once was whole What once was pure What once waz full Is now riped into a thousand peices I wont the pain to stop My heart cant take it no more Its turning to ash and blowing away in the winds I stair at the rain wishing it would wash away all the sorrow and fix my brocken wings The rain turns to blood that only i can see The screams of the people i love and care about is the onlysound I hurt them and they dont even notice it Im a dark force brought on to the earth by drugs I lie awake at night thinking of ways to make the pain go away I always think of death I try to be happy but i can never be truly happy There is a bottle of pillls sitting on the table I keep thinking of taking them and never see the light of day agein Then all the pain would be gone but i would be a cowerd and have nothing left to say I hear his voice in the back of my mind saying "please dont do it, I need you!" I take the bottle and throw it at the wall The pills spill all over the floor The wind blows open the door

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Re: What once was (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 09:29:24 PM AEST
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A bit sad but it ends up in a good way
blessings

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