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Array ( [sid] => 166701 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~Home Coming~ [time] => 2011-07-06 18:16:16 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Through the misty veil of tears~
separating your world from mine
My reflection disappears~
as I retrace the crossed line...

Backing away I stumble~
regaining my feet I run
As the world behind me crumbles~
with so much left undone...

The wherefore & why I sought~
still a pipe dream unknown
So uselessly for fought~
& on the wind away blown...

Left in a world turned nightmare~
to question where I belong
With no understanding shared~
for what had become my song...

Too much did I reveal~
on this fools errand for gold
Through alchemy made deals~
for what could not be sold...

But learn I did as I cried~
for what could never be
Letting the wish within me die~
so that from it I'd be free...

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 234 [topic] => 61 [informant] => MisfitMe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

~Home Coming~

Contributed by MisfitMe on Wednesday, 6th July 2011 @ 06:16:16 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Through the misty veil of tears~
separating your world from mine
My reflection disappears~
as I retrace the crossed line...

Backing away I stumble~
regaining my feet I run
As the world behind me crumbles~
with so much left undone...

The wherefore & why I sought~
still a pipe dream unknown
So uselessly for fought~
& on the wind away blown...

Left in a world turned nightmare~
to question where I belong
With no understanding shared~
for what had become my song...

Too much did I reveal~
on this fools errand for gold
Through alchemy made deals~
for what could not be sold...

But learn I did as I cried~
for what could never be
Letting the wish within me die~
so that from it I'd be free...

Copyright © MisfitMe ... [ 2011-07-06 18:16:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ~Home Coming~ (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 06:22:03 PM AEST
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A very awesome, creative, powerful write.
luv it.
blessings,
emy

Re: ~Home Coming~ (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 22nd April 2014 @ 10:43:38 AM AEST
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A very powerful piece of poetry you have written here... What a delight to read such a treasure! Everything fits: the structure, the rhymes convey the mood,and you set the tone wonderfully. Then there is that ending- perfection. I know I have read something special when I find myself holding my breath at the end. Exceptional!

~Scorp

Re: ~Home Coming~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 18th May 2014 @ 03:58:03 PM AEST
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truly beautiful! hugs n' love nessa

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