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None like yesterday
The tears, the tiredness
The heartbreaking pain.
The blood wanted
And the eyes full of confusion
To why on earth
And what just happened
A silent whisper
The light again
Don’t make it harder
I’m trying to be sane
Again wanted
Somehow not left
The mind changer
At his best
God knows whats to lose
Heaven knows whats to keep
Maybe it’s only the unknown
That’s making us weep
The unfulfilled promises
The words taken to far
The actions speaking louder
We are both on a par
This is out of control confusion
To me, it’s on your side
I know what I want, you know me too well
I guess it the factor in what makes us cry
You don’t know what you have
Until it’s away in a shadow
Until it’s not there anymore
And has disappeared fully.
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Controlling Confusion.

Contributed by CommasCanSeperate on Wednesday, 6th July 2011 @ 11:53:25 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Nights unsleepable
None like yesterday
The tears, the tiredness
The heartbreaking pain.
The blood wanted
And the eyes full of confusion
To why on earth
And what just happened
A silent whisper
The light again
Don’t make it harder
I’m trying to be sane
Again wanted
Somehow not left
The mind changer
At his best
God knows whats to lose
Heaven knows whats to keep
Maybe it’s only the unknown
That’s making us weep
The unfulfilled promises
The words taken to far
The actions speaking louder
We are both on a par
This is out of control confusion
To me, it’s on your side
I know what I want, you know me too well
I guess it the factor in what makes us cry
You don’t know what you have
Until it’s away in a shadow
Until it’s not there anymore
And has disappeared fully.

Copyright Â© CommasCanSeperate ... [ 2011-07-06 11:53:25]
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Re: Controlling Confusion. (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 6th July 2011 @ 03:30:22 PM AEST
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So true.
You did a great job, here.
Blessings

Re: Controlling Confusion. (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Thursday, 7th July 2011 @ 08:11:04 AM AEST
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You put so much emotion into your words, I just cried, ty
SP

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