Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 16:26:41 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 166671 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => blind love [time] => 2011-07-02 16:11:46 [hometext] => [bodytext] => "i love you he" wispered in my ear
thinking that my mind was there
inoccently he walked out the door
leaving me laying on the floor
what had happened was unknown to me
and as i got up i could hardly see

but i saw the scars on my heart
that i gave me when he parted
were could he go?
there's no evidence to show
what he did, so
i to must go
find him and kill him myself
that will be my only revenge

you think am evil well am not
this is going to take all i got
leave me now before i get upset
what going on with me, tell me please
cause i cant see
he blinded me with his love
so i cant see all whats above. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 124 [topic] => 22 [informant] => keela12 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

blind love

Contributed by keela12 on Saturday, 2nd July 2011 @ 04:11:46 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

"i love you he" wispered in my ear
thinking that my mind was there
inoccently he walked out the door
leaving me laying on the floor
what had happened was unknown to me
and as i got up i could hardly see

but i saw the scars on my heart
that i gave me when he parted
were could he go?
there's no evidence to show
what he did, so
i to must go
find him and kill him myself
that will be my only revenge

you think am evil well am not
this is going to take all i got
leave me now before i get upset
what going on with me, tell me please
cause i cant see
he blinded me with his love
so i cant see all whats above.

Copyright © keela12 ... [ 2011-07-02 16:11:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: blind love (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Monday, 11th July 2011 @ 01:05:42 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

love is often blind to deceit. I am sorry if you were hurt by someone who lied to you. It really is the ultimate betrayal, but to be happy, the best thing to do is to forget that the liar ever even existed.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com