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Array ( [sid] => 16659 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => all because of you [time] => 2003-04-28 16:05:00 [hometext] => this is written for two of my loves... Rob and Gina... depression, manic phases and bipolarism can be so very hard... but there is light at the end of the tunnel, especially when you have so much to give to this world... [bodytext] => i looked into your eyes
so filled with sorrow
confusion lives here
which path do you follow?

depression is comfortable
manic a "safe haven"
but what of your spirit
has it flown like the raven?

look deeper, my friend
peer into your soul
this life you have bought
has taken it's toll

plunge into your madness
recover you being
if you look very hard
you'll see what i'm seeing

a precious, beautiful person
full of love and light
an amazing young creature
a wondrous sight

you are so special
so unique and robust
coddle your feelings
in this you can trust

there's a light, i see
at the end of the tunnel
embrace it, my friend
open your heart like a funnel

i believe in you
with my heart, through and through
this world's a better place
all because of you...

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all because of you

Contributed by LadyDama on Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



i looked into your eyes
so filled with sorrow
confusion lives here
which path do you follow?

depression is comfortable
manic a "safe haven"
but what of your spirit
has it flown like the raven?

look deeper, my friend
peer into your soul
this life you have bought
has taken it's toll

plunge into your madness
recover you being
if you look very hard
you'll see what i'm seeing

a precious, beautiful person
full of love and light
an amazing young creature
a wondrous sight

you are so special
so unique and robust
coddle your feelings
in this you can trust

there's a light, i see
at the end of the tunnel
embrace it, my friend
open your heart like a funnel

i believe in you
with my heart, through and through
this world's a better place
all because of you...





Copyright © LadyDama ... [ 2003-04-28 16:05:00]
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Re: all because of you (User Rating: 1 )
by springchic1979 on Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 04:07:41 PM AEST
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Very sweet LadyDama. Beautiful words from a caring friend.

Yvonne


Re: all because of you (User Rating: 1 )
by lilch4ever on Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 04:22:54 PM AEST
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awww very sweet and inspirational. Wonderfully written.


Re: all because of you (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 04:59:31 PM AEST
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wonderful write
Shari


Re: all because of you (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 08:16:22 PM AEST
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this is an amazing write! you really got down and in there with this poem! i love it:)
hugs n' love nessa


Re: all because of you (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 11:48:08 PM AEST
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This is wonderful
Michelle




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