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Array ( [sid] => 166537 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A FATED LOVE PART 2: My Struggle Within: Now The Rest Is Up To Him [time] => 2011-06-14 08:26:36 [hometext] => I wrote this poem for the most loving, giving, selfless, trustworthy, honest, sincere man that I have ever had the priviledge to love, as well as be loved by. I love you Cal! [bodytext] => There are so many choices that need to be made
Actually I know that everything is going to be o.k.
So don't you worry cause there's no need to be afraid.
Just remember that I will always love you with each and every breath that I take.
For the most important and difficult decisions I have already made.

Now I know I didn't consult you when I decided to act,
But I believe the conclusion that I have come to is based on pure fact.
There is one very important factor in our relationship that we have been unsure of.
Well love, I don't want you to be worried but that wonderful factor, I am now sure of.
Deep within me I can feel the most precious part of you that I have been blessed with by the good Lord above.

Shortly we will have to go our separate ways and regretfully be apart,
And my soul is silently urging me on with the knowledge that I carry deep within my heart.
I need you to understand that this is something I must do to protect this living soul and keep it from going into the eternal darkness.
Please understand that the risk is too great
I am refusing to give back this wonderful gift that you helped to create.

My love for you runs so deep that I couldn't leave without first letting you know,
I hope you can someday forgive me for bringing you into this mess, and there's a couple more things that I would like you to know.
When I return I will be bringing with me the greatest gift that God could ever bestow
And to you, my dear love, one day when he or she is ready to know
Tell them how much I wanted them, loved them, and not to feel low.

Tell them that one day we will be re-united and that I never wanted to go.I can honestly say you will be the best person to care for them; this you and I both know.
Make sure that you yourself are re-united with another beautiful piece of your soul that our wonderful God above realized needed to be sowed.She is such a rare and beautifully crafted jewel and the part of your soul that mingled with mine to create a brand new soul needs to see her and love her as do you, because before you realize it the years will have flown.
I wish I could stay I would have loved to have been able to watch them grow.

I promise to stay in touch until the time comes,
When it does I'll need you to be there to take him or her so that I may return.
Unfortunately I will have to give them and you up in the end.
I shall always love you no matter how far this crazy whirlwind of a life makes me bend.

You are too young to be alone.
One of these days you will decide that it's time to move on.
I sincerly wish that you will choose someone who will treat you with kindness and be faithful to you, all the day long.
In this cruel yet forgiving world all children should be put first where their guardian angels sing along with them the most happiest of songs.
So remember each and every time you look into the eyes of the soul that our two souls created.

Now I must say farewell to you my one true love.
And I must also give thanks to you my dear.
For you have shown me that sould mates do exist, that true love isn't just a myth.
Forever, and for all of eternity I shall keep the love that we were so briefly allowed to share deep inside of my heart.
And if you just so happen to decide that you can not bear to be without me, as surely as I feel all througout my entire being,
Just know that you are welcome to come with me,
I always want you with me
But I will be content just keeping you in my heart, if here is where you want to be, if not, come with me,
Let's make our lives what we've always wanted them to be.
Would you like to make a fresh start with me? [comments] => 1 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 31 [informant] => Shereal_14 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
A FATED LOVE PART 2: My Struggle Within: Now The Rest Is Up To Him

Contributed by Shereal_14 on Tuesday, 14th June 2011 @ 08:26:36 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



There are so many choices that need to be made
Actually I know that everything is going to be o.k.
So don't you worry cause there's no need to be afraid.
Just remember that I will always love you with each and every breath that I take.
For the most important and difficult decisions I have already made.

Now I know I didn't consult you when I decided to act,
But I believe the conclusion that I have come to is based on pure fact.
There is one very important factor in our relationship that we have been unsure of.
Well love, I don't want you to be worried but that wonderful factor, I am now sure of.
Deep within me I can feel the most precious part of you that I have been blessed with by the good Lord above.

Shortly we will have to go our separate ways and regretfully be apart,
And my soul is silently urging me on with the knowledge that I carry deep within my heart.
I need you to understand that this is something I must do to protect this living soul and keep it from going into the eternal darkness.
Please understand that the risk is too great
I am refusing to give back this wonderful gift that you helped to create.

My love for you runs so deep that I couldn't leave without first letting you know,
I hope you can someday forgive me for bringing you into this mess, and there's a couple more things that I would like you to know.
When I return I will be bringing with me the greatest gift that God could ever bestow
And to you, my dear love, one day when he or she is ready to know
Tell them how much I wanted them, loved them, and not to feel low.

Tell them that one day we will be re-united and that I never wanted to go.I can honestly say you will be the best person to care for them; this you and I both know.
Make sure that you yourself are re-united with another beautiful piece of your soul that our wonderful God above realized needed to be sowed.She is such a rare and beautifully crafted jewel and the part of your soul that mingled with mine to create a brand new soul needs to see her and love her as do you, because before you realize it the years will have flown.
I wish I could stay I would have loved to have been able to watch them grow.

I promise to stay in touch until the time comes,
When it does I'll need you to be there to take him or her so that I may return.
Unfortunately I will have to give them and you up in the end.
I shall always love you no matter how far this crazy whirlwind of a life makes me bend.

You are too young to be alone.
One of these days you will decide that it's time to move on.
I sincerly wish that you will choose someone who will treat you with kindness and be faithful to you, all the day long.
In this cruel yet forgiving world all children should be put first where their guardian angels sing along with them the most happiest of songs.
So remember each and every time you look into the eyes of the soul that our two souls created.

Now I must say farewell to you my one true love.
And I must also give thanks to you my dear.
For you have shown me that sould mates do exist, that true love isn't just a myth.
Forever, and for all of eternity I shall keep the love that we were so briefly allowed to share deep inside of my heart.
And if you just so happen to decide that you can not bear to be without me, as surely as I feel all througout my entire being,
Just know that you are welcome to come with me,
I always want you with me
But I will be content just keeping you in my heart, if here is where you want to be, if not, come with me,
Let's make our lives what we've always wanted them to be.
Would you like to make a fresh start with me?




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Re: A FATED LOVE PART 2: My Struggle Within: Now The Rest Is Up To Him (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 14th June 2011 @ 09:46:31 PM AEST
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So sad but very touching write. Great job. blessings,
emy




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