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the wonderous sights I've seen
but all my soul now hungers for,
the places in between

the memories and the moments,
beautiful and obscene
but lately all I'm pining for,
the spaces in between

I've read the books
and all the words
that tell me what it means,
but most of life lies hidden
on the pages in between

just to slip under the radar,
discover the lost seam
forget the things that stand and shout,
and relish the between.

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Spaces

Contributed by spike on Sunday, 12th June 2011 @ 10:00:41 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

So many brilliant vistas,
the wonderous sights I've seen
but all my soul now hungers for,
the places in between

the memories and the moments,
beautiful and obscene
but lately all I'm pining for,
the spaces in between

I've read the books
and all the words
that tell me what it means,
but most of life lies hidden
on the pages in between

just to slip under the radar,
discover the lost seam
forget the things that stand and shout,
and relish the between.

Copyright © spike ... [ 2011-06-12 22:00:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Spaces (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Monday, 13th June 2011 @ 11:00:06 AM AEST
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Hi Spike

Yes - that would be nice. Wonder how many answers we would discover if we could remove
our blinkers at the right times?

Well said, my man.

Tommy

Re: Spaces (User Rating: 1 )
by Tomboy on Monday, 13th June 2011 @ 12:48:39 PM AEST
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Perfect poem in every way, five stars!!

Re: Spaces (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 13th June 2011 @ 04:51:30 PM AEST
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Very good, thought provoking write.
Awesome as always.
smiles, blessings,
emy

Re: Spaces (User Rating: 1 )
by petulinka on Tuesday, 14th June 2011 @ 07:40:20 AM AEST
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yes its brilliant!:)..the verses all of it, really great!!:)

Re: Spaces (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 14th June 2011 @ 10:08:02 AM AEST
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I would love it. I enjoyed this write, you made me ponder each word and moment.

Michelle

Re: Spaces (User Rating: 1 )
by Rasberry on Friday, 17th June 2011 @ 12:10:44 AM AEST
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Gud write!

Re: Spaces (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Saturday, 8th October 2011 @ 07:28:45 PM AEST
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Because you long for the inbetween...I love this. I spend time there and see no rhymes. LOL! But I am known for much abstract. Still caught my eye.

ming

Re: Spaces (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 8th December 2011 @ 10:34:56 AM AEST
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Like the roads least traveled, the spaces "in between" are laden with treasures 'n' rewards most folks ignore or too busy to take or contemplate. It's nice knowin' ya as a close friend and readin' some of your posts. We should talk about such things more when ya visit instead of doin' all those memory makin' adventures! Well, maybe not. We've always got ypdc.
wabl
KenMoore
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