Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 16:07:21 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 166529 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Can't You Tell [time] => 2011-06-12 20:41:32 [hometext] => maybe you can relate... [bodytext] => Men are complete anuses you claim,
that they’re all the same.
I hear you loud and clear,
but that’s where you’re wrong, my dear.

You tell me he still doesn’t treat you right,
yet you keep going back to him!
I won’t tell you to stop
because this is truly your decision.

I can’t express how stupid this is,
especially when the words you need to hear
come out of my mouth, and not his.
It just makes me want to kick him in the rear!

In spite of this, I’ll always be here to listen,
hoping and waiting for something newsworthy.
Needless to say, it’s not worth paying attention
to the same old story.
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 341 [topic] => 33 [informant] => Ambivalence [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

Can't You Tell

Contributed by Ambivalence on Sunday, 12th June 2011 @ 08:41:32 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

Men are complete anuses you claim,
that they’re all the same.
I hear you loud and clear,
but that’s where you’re wrong, my dear.

You tell me he still doesn’t treat you right,
yet you keep going back to him!
I won’t tell you to stop
because this is truly your decision.

I can’t express how stupid this is,
especially when the words you need to hear
come out of my mouth, and not his.
It just makes me want to kick him in the rear!

In spite of this, I’ll always be here to listen,
hoping and waiting for something newsworthy.
Needless to say, it’s not worth paying attention
to the same old story.

Copyright Â© Ambivalence ... [ 2011-06-12 20:41:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Can't You Tell (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Sunday, 12th June 2011 @ 10:05:58 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

frustration nicely expressed. Men need a place, but women need a reason, as the saying goes. Take away the reason for staying with a joker, and magically, the terrain changes.

Spike

Re: Can't You Tell (User Rating: 1 )
by Tomboy on Monday, 13th June 2011 @ 12:58:10 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Oh yes, definitely can relate!!

Re: Can't You Tell (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 13th June 2011 @ 04:59:23 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Good work.
smiles.
emy

Re: Can't You Tell (User Rating: 1 )
by longhaircg on Tuesday, 14th June 2011 @ 09:10:21 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I also can relate to this, sometimes the known is less frightening then the unknown.

Re: Can't You Tell (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Wednesday, 15th June 2011 @ 06:07:26 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Hi

Vive la difference! At least in poetry we can
express the inequalities in the sexes without
being accused of 'political incorrectness.'

Makes the world spin. If and when it stops
then we'll all step off.

Well written - like your style.

Tommy

Re: Can't You Tell (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 7th July 2014 @ 01:26:04 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

your compassion comes through here, beautifully penned,

hugs n' love nessa

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. Â©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright Â© to their submitter. All the rest Copyright Â© 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com