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Array ( [sid] => 16651 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => another day [time] => 2003-04-28 12:05:00 [hometext] => this poem is about my dad [bodytext] => just sitting here feeling utterly stupid
watching wishing drinking letting her get away
u say conversations done then why do i scream
if its impossible to get through to u
then how do u know then how do u know
i hate u i hate u i hate u

my view point my gun my mind
my stomach my potential to be u
my puncture wounds how i wanted to love u

i have no idea of a human now
thinking sleeping feeling cutting u out of me
u say im deserving u say shes a wh*re
if its impossible to get through to u
then how do u know then how do u know
i hate u i hate u i hate u

my view point my gun my mind
my stomach my potential to be u
my puncture wounds how i wanted to love u

i thought of free will
i thought of happy saturdays
walking through the trees
making memories id love to keep
yelling at the dog raking leaves
BEING A FAMILY [comments] => 4 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Apartment213 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

another day

Contributed by Apartment213 on Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

just sitting here feeling utterly stupid
watching wishing drinking letting her get away
u say conversations done then why do i scream
if its impossible to get through to u
then how do u know then how do u know
i hate u i hate u i hate u

my view point my gun my mind
my stomach my potential to be u
my puncture wounds how i wanted to love u

i have no idea of a human now
thinking sleeping feeling cutting u out of me
u say im deserving u say shes a wh*re
if its impossible to get through to u
then how do u know then how do u know
i hate u i hate u i hate u

my view point my gun my mind
my stomach my potential to be u
my puncture wounds how i wanted to love u

i thought of free will
i thought of happy saturdays
walking through the trees
making memories id love to keep
yelling at the dog raking leaves
BEING A FAMILY

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Re: another day (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 09:48:55 PM AEST
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hey love, im sooo sorry you feel this way...you're dad is an @$$hole and you know im going to say something to that b*****d when i get down there...until then, cheer up...great write though

Lindsey :O*

Re: another day (User Rating: 1 )
by wazarov on Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 11:37:00 PM AEST
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dear friend, i understand your anger and your dream of a family, i hope for you that you don`t make the same mistake with your own familly in the future.

Re: another day (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 12:06:00 AM AEST
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Wow, Kenny..you need to calm down....
Jenni

Re: another day (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 03:51:14 AM AEST
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It is true that you do not have to make the same mistake with your own family. But I can understand your pain. Good poem.

ShadowsCloud

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