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Array ( [sid] => 166484 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Close The Eyes [time] => 2011-06-06 13:48:21 [hometext] => [bodytext] => On again
then
off again
it seems like it never ends,
levels of complications keep rising
I'm caught up in your system of soul grinding
micro managing everything
the truth you are always denying.
Insane
pain rains down like water
causing emotional disorder
frustration overwhelms
making me do things I don't wanna,
why don't you do you
and
let me be me
go somewhere else with all that drama
that you
seem to need.

Oh let me go
what do you want me for
I've bled all I can
I can't bleed no more,
every time I think it's over
and there's no grindin'
you release the Kraken
and terrorize me again,
You keep cutting and cutting
can't you see that I'm dead
let me rest in peace
close the eyes on my severed head.
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 75 [informant] => unknown_utopia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Close The Eyes

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Monday, 6th June 2011 @ 01:48:21 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

On again
then
off again
it seems like it never ends,
levels of complications keep rising
I'm caught up in your system of soul grinding
micro managing everything
the truth you are always denying.
Insane
pain rains down like water
causing emotional disorder
frustration overwhelms
making me do things I don't wanna,
why don't you do you
and
let me be me
go somewhere else with all that drama
that you
seem to need.

Oh let me go
what do you want me for
I've bled all I can
I can't bleed no more,
every time I think it's over
and there's no grindin'
you release the Kraken
and terrorize me again,
You keep cutting and cutting
can't you see that I'm dead
let me rest in peace
close the eyes on my severed head.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2011-06-06 13:48:21]
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Re: Close The Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 6th June 2011 @ 07:20:06 PM AEST
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This sounds serious.
I don't really think I wonna know what brought this one on.
Great writing.
scratching my head,
later,
emy

Re: Close The Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Tuesday, 7th June 2011 @ 11:54:27 AM AEST
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Close the eyes on my severed head,anger frustration,seeing how things are and how they could be,powerfully expressive from a heart in pain.

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