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On my mind.
Contributed by
ManaM
on
Tuesday, 17th May 2011 @ 06:26:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Death holds on to hope of taking over life
my mind swings like a pendulum left to right
what sacrifices have you made for the good of humankind.
Or do you sit in silence watching the world pass you by.
You show me what I do wrong, but it has nothing to do with order.
I embrace the love that is chaos and live according to its law.
Sitting in the middle is not always a place that I wish to be.
But I have come to terms with flowing like the wind above the trees.
I've sacrificed my life time and time again.
Been in places where worlds meet and where time never ends.
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ManaM
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2011-05-17 06:26:15] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: On my mind.
(User Rating: 1 ) by ammar on
Tuesday, 17th May 2011 @ 12:30:13 PM AEST (User
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That's an enjoyable read. I particularly like the comparisons you make:
1) Your mind swinging like a pendulum
2) Flowing like the wind
Keep writing
Peace
Ammar |
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