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[sid] => 166197
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => the feeling inside
[time] => 2011-05-06 07:41:15
[hometext] => my poem is about falling for someone who didnt fall back. my poem is an expression of the emotion i hide behind my simle. my poem could go on forever, but everything ends at one point or another.
[bodytext] => the feeling inside burns more than the flame. the tears singe my cheeks, but still you never came. i fell for you. you played my heart. now im drowning in my sorrow, in the dark. when you broke me, over the phone. i dont think you get how that made me feel alone. the bittersweet love i thought we had, you ripped to peices, now im undoubtfully sad. i gave you my world. my heart and soul. and all you did was engulf me in the world so cold. you say you care. you told me you loved me. but that was just a lie. there never was a we. when i write, it comes from the heart. the pain goes to my fingers, and i just fall apart. my words mean more than what they show. but really what you did was just low. im tired of giving everyone my heart. im done loving, careing, like being shot with a dart. instead of cupid hitting me with an arrow. death came and touched me, his fingers cold and narrow. im slowly rotting in this corner of mine. so im done writeing. this is the last line.... [comments] => 0 [counter] => 73 [topic] => 22 [informant] => nightmare [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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