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Array ( [sid] => 1661 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lame [time] => 2002-08-03 10:03:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => yes i have a little bit of something left
you never know what's going to happen next
what's to expect when my mouth is a wreck
can't live second best in grande auto theft
at least that's what it seems like i think
but i'm not supposed to think or speak or blink
just do what is best at the bottom of a drink
sell in sell out at every damnable comedy wink
i hate the suppositions put in my positions
can't talk in or walk in any old rendition
constant conditioning of tame superstitions
plastered on every magazine this week's edition
it's making me mad even though it's a bit sad
all the fun that i've had is turning out so bad
and just like my dad this whole game is a fad
that is making me mad and still looking so bad

i played the game
of what's my name
it's not the same
it's kind of lame
i wrote the rhyme
spent all my time
paid for my crime
but not this time

some people wondering where in the world i went
no mistake i took a break so all this could vent
maybe all these words should just be heaven sent
but the more i go on the more it seems i am bent
way out of shape in and out of some proportion
like a little part of me just had an abortion
a twisted sick little hell raising contortion
seems to be the only way i won't be a distortion
so now i'm back up in your alley right here
want me or not you won't be rid of me oh dear
steer clear if it's me you don't want to hear
you can't push me away when i'm coming near
it's making my day even when it goes the wrong way
i'm right here to stay no matter how me you play
and when things i can't say i hope and i pray
that my day will be made however it will play [comments] => 4 [counter] => 252 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Daniel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Lame

Contributed by Daniel on Saturday, 3rd August 2002 @ 10:03:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



yes i have a little bit of something left
you never know what's going to happen next
what's to expect when my mouth is a wreck
can't live second best in grande auto theft
at least that's what it seems like i think
but i'm not supposed to think or speak or blink
just do what is best at the bottom of a drink
sell in sell out at every damnable comedy wink
i hate the suppositions put in my positions
can't talk in or walk in any old rendition
constant conditioning of tame superstitions
plastered on every magazine this week's edition
it's making me mad even though it's a bit sad
all the fun that i've had is turning out so bad
and just like my dad this whole game is a fad
that is making me mad and still looking so bad

i played the game
of what's my name
it's not the same
it's kind of lame
i wrote the rhyme
spent all my time
paid for my crime
but not this time

some people wondering where in the world i went
no mistake i took a break so all this could vent
maybe all these words should just be heaven sent
but the more i go on the more it seems i am bent
way out of shape in and out of some proportion
like a little part of me just had an abortion
a twisted sick little hell raising contortion
seems to be the only way i won't be a distortion
so now i'm back up in your alley right here
want me or not you won't be rid of me oh dear
steer clear if it's me you don't want to hear
you can't push me away when i'm coming near
it's making my day even when it goes the wrong way
i'm right here to stay no matter how me you play
and when things i can't say i hope and i pray
that my day will be made however it will play




Copyright © Daniel ... [ 2002-08-03 10:03:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Lame (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 3rd August 2002 @ 11:25:08 AM AEST
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hi there,
Very good write my friend!!!!!
u go noooww!!!!!!
PEACE, LUV, DETERMINATION,
emy


Re: Lame (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Saturday, 3rd August 2002 @ 11:47:58 AM AEST
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Awesome Write Danny!! I love your second verse... =:)

Always,
Dani



Re: Lame (User Rating: 1 )
by Damon_Maynard on Monday, 5th August 2002 @ 04:56:24 PM AEST
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easy... a bit angry right now?

"want me or not you won't be rid of me oh dear"

"steer clear if it's me you don't want to hear"

Careful...what's up? You're starting to sound a bit like me somewhere! And I thought eyes were fixed and feet were planted>>>?
Still though...plenty of polish.


Re: Lame (User Rating: 1 )
by Mya on Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 03:47:57 PM AEST
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good daniel




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